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Would you think it to be a turn-on if somebody wrote a poem for you or inspired by you?
Do you like this poem? Some of it is kinda inside-joke like but... yeah. lemme know, please

"I'm driving myself insane, oushing away the pain
I'm away from you for now, your father is doing how?

I'm sitting in a big cld chair, baby smells in the air
I don't know what to do when all i can think of is you
A chill creaps down my back, working in which i lack.
All i want to do is sit here holding you.

Kepp me nice and warm, you'll never bring me harm
I do all i can do to get closer to you
Fuzzy ears and candy soap, you give so much hope
My dreaming is never through, when i'm dreaming of you"

Let meh know what you think, please *huggles anyone that wants or needs one. and gives a kiss on the cheek for those who want it*
(continued details on the poem in a sec)

2006-11-14 14:56:45 · 3 answers · asked by Youngling 4 in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

My friend's dad is in the hospital and that why i mentioned him in the poem.
The fuzzy ears and candy soap was an inside thing.
Baby smells was because I was babysitting.
The pain was of not being able to talk to him.
His name is Craig ^_^

2006-11-14 14:58:11 · update #1

Not this poem persay but in general in the turn on thing

2006-11-14 15:07:53 · update #2

3 answers

I love it...it's very creative, and "inside"stuff always makes things more intimate. You need to check your spelling though. As for being a TURN ON...I don't know about that, but I bet he'll be flattered. Good luck!

2006-11-14 15:01:57 · answer #1 · answered by persnickety1022 7 · 1 0

Cute. I think he will like it.

2006-11-14 15:00:30 · answer #2 · answered by kayboff 7 · 1 0

i dont like poetry

2006-11-14 14:59:36 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

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