A dark cloud hanging
Just hanging
With no light to see
Without light
Without hope
A future not seen
A fight to grow
To see what you can’t see
Emptiness all around
Empty pain
Empty suffering
In a youth so green
A readiness is needed
To learn and be who you can be
Freedom you seek
Free soul
Free mind
The life intended for teen
2006-11-14 12:35:56 · 2 answers · asked by milly_1963 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
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Milly
2006-11-14 12:36:42 · update #1
The last line is
The life intended for a teen
Sorry a typo error
2006-11-14 12:54:51 · update #2
Sounds pretty good. Everything a teenager is going through and thinking. I mean yea, it sounds pretty dark but its pretty much how most teens feel at a certain point in their life. To be "free" is what all teens feel will be their release from whatever is bothering or holding them back. Sara.
2006-11-14 12:44:37 · answer #1 · answered by * Wishfulthinker * 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its alright..some parts flow more than others.
2006-11-14 20:43:47 · answer #2 · answered by purdue_softball12 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋