The sentance I am having trouble with is . . .
In order not to get fired you better get along with everyone because your boss doesn’t want to baby sit you to do this they just expect it
what do i need to change. Or fix. Or whatever.. easy two points??
2006-11-14 11:28:14 · 15 answers · asked by softbalbabii05 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
To improve job security, you should strive to get along with co-workers. Your boss doesn't want to babysit.
2006-11-14 11:36:32 · answer #1 · answered by eyedoc_04 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In order not to get fired you better get along with everyone. Your boss doesn’t want to baby sit you. He just expects it.
2006-11-14 11:30:37 · answer #2 · answered by ignoramus 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In order not to get fired, you better get along with everyone. Your boss doesn't want to baby-sit you. They just expect it.
I tried to use as many of the same words as possible. I don't know if you needed it to be verbatim.
2006-11-14 11:33:16 · answer #3 · answered by rutheo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I suggest making two sentences out of it. It will flow better that way and be easier to understand. Try this:
In order not to get fired, you had better get along with everyone. Your boss doesn't want to baby sit you--they just expect that you'll do this.
Good luck!
2006-11-14 11:37:59 · answer #4 · answered by Patrick (Midwest) 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all, the wording of this sentence is rather odd. But, based on what you have written above, here is my suggestion.
In order not to get fired, you better get along with everyone because your boss doesn't want to baby-sit you to do this. They just expect it.
A better sentence that conveys the same information:
In order to avoid being fired, it is better to get along with everyone. Your boss does not want to have to babysit you to make sure everyone gets along. He/She just expects it.
2006-11-14 11:33:29 · answer #5 · answered by imhalf_the_sourgirl_iused_tobe 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In order not to get fired, you better get along with everyone because your boss doesn't want to babysit you to do this, they just expect it.
2006-11-14 13:06:27 · answer #6 · answered by LeightonR 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In order no to get fired, you better get along with everyone. Because your boss doesn't want to baby sit you to do this, they just expect it.
This might be the right answer, I tried my best, but I'm not sure.
Well, hope this helps
2006-11-14 11:34:54 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not sure what the "they just expect it" is supposed to refer to, so I'll just assume that you mean "your boss expects you to get along with others."
Try this:
If you don't want to get fired, get along with your co-workers. Your boss doesn't want to babysit you, and expects that you will treat others with kindness and respect.
I know that this changes your sentence a lot, but it is much clearer this way. I tried to edit the sentence without totally changing to original wording and structure.
2006-11-14 11:40:32 · answer #8 · answered by Ella Minnow Pea 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In order to keep your job, you should get along with everybody. Your boss expects this, and doesn't want to babysit you.
2006-11-14 11:36:11 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
In order to keep your job, teamwork with co-workers is required. The employer cannot spend time being a referee and expects maturity from his employees.
2006-11-14 11:32:37 · answer #10 · answered by diacar60 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋