Is this a good thank you letter? How can I improve?

Question

I am a teacher, and so is this person that I am giving this Goose Award to. How can I change/improve this? Here:

My Goose is a special teacher, collaborator, and strong supporter for ESOL program at Cherry Run.

My Goose works with many needy students at each grade level, provides them with strategies, and encourages them to be confident readers.

My Goose collaborates with all teachers, shares her expertise, and trains teachers to sharpen their teaching skills.

My Goose supports ESOL students in many ways. Brianna Miller helps ESOL scheduling, grouping, testing, and most of all, working with ESOL students to make them successful.

Thank you Brianna Miller for your unwavering support for ESOL. You sure make a difference at Cherry Run!

Answer 1

Not #2 - no student wants to be known as needy.
I like the last sentence best.

Answer 2

The third sentence i don't really think you need it, it's sorta repeating the first sentence. may be you can combine those too? just suggesting