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Lighhouse In Me

So each have a journey
We often wander
Sailing in serenity
Fighting against we yonder

Life's full of bliss
Sometimes misery
Leaping beyond
Sailing + Lighthouse

Who needs a lighthouse
Canoe arise to shrink
A light forgotten
But standing

Cast all the darkness
Shed a light from me
Rays will led
Sleep in my arms finally

2006-11-14 03:21:57 · 3 answers · asked by guRl 6 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

3 answers

I dont get it.

2006-11-14 03:23:18 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 1 0

Whats to criticize? Whats to praise? I just cant put any of it together.

Lighthouse light
Shining bright
Guide me through this dreadful night

I just 'knocked that up' and that also means next to nothing to me. I suppose I could do another few verses, want to buy it??
It's yours, no charge.
I would be really sick if you sold it on and made million dollars, maybe as a TV Ad for 'Lighthouse night cap'
Good luck with that!

2006-11-14 03:36:24 · answer #2 · answered by budding author 7 · 0 0

I don't know if you understand the very complicated concept of this site...it's for questions not bad poetry.

2006-11-14 03:30:06 · answer #3 · answered by BAnne 7 · 0 0

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