there was a young bloke from japan,
whos lyrics never would scan,
when asked why this was so,
he said, 'well do you know',
it's because i try and fit as many words into the last line as i possibly can!
2006-11-13 20:57:26 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Comics & Animation
A mathematician called Hall
Had a hexahedronical ball.
And the cube of it's weight
Times his pecker plus eight
IS HIS PHONE NUMBER--GIVE HIM A CALL?
2006-11-13 23:41:40 · answer #1 · answered by the gunners 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Sweet limerick. An original take on a classic form. You're just some punctuation and capitalization away from perfection. Oh yeah, and the syllables should go 8 8 5 5 and the last one doesn't matter as that's the whole punchline. :-)
2006-11-13 21:00:05 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A writer from far off Japan
Wrote poetry that didn't scan.
It all worked out fine
Till he reached the last line
And then it went completely to pieces and didn't rhyme.
2006-11-13 21:04:22 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Haiku are easy;
All you need to do is to
Write seventeen syl--
14 NOV 06, 1503 hrs, GMT.
2006-11-14 02:06:00 · answer #4 · answered by cdf-rom 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool!
2006-11-14 12:52:32 · answer #5 · answered by SWORD LI 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ithink the gunners answer was better
2006-11-15 13:41:08 · answer #6 · answered by barn owl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
he was succking my hand
stuck it up his bum
then he ***
you started with japan mate
2006-11-15 04:48:39 · answer #7 · answered by russellhamuk 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Like it!
2006-11-13 21:24:07 · answer #8 · answered by Janbull 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
HAHAHA Thats pretty good, very pointless but pretty good.
2006-11-13 20:59:50 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
cool
2006-11-13 21:43:30 · answer #10 · answered by dream theatre 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋