This dinner is dedicated in memory of the untimely passing of Mary, mother of our esteemed supporter, John Sm

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This dinner is dedicated in memory of the untimely passing of Mary, mother of our esteemed supporter, John Sm

please help me rewrite this sentence

2006-11-13 14:25:27 · 3 answers · asked by chan 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay

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This memorial dinner is dedicated to Mary Smith, who is the mother of our esteemed supporter John Smith and who passed away suddenly.

2006-11-13 14:33:46 · answer #1 · answered by fancyname 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋

This dinner is dedicated to the memory of Mary who recently passed. Mother of our esteemed supporter John .....

2006-11-13 22:34:39 · answer #2 · answered by Satsune 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

This memorial dinner is a tribute to honor the life of Mary Smith, the mother of John Smith, one of our most esteemed and loyal supporters.

I would not mention "untimely" or "passing" but focus on her life and contributions for which you are thankful.

2006-11-13 22:36:49 · answer #3 · answered by Nghiem E 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋