tell me what you think! and if it needs more situations, or if it's fine the way it is....
You sat on the toilet, test in hand.
You thought about adoption,
But your friends wouldn’t understand.
Today my mommy was ashamed of me.
The doctors said that I would never see,
That I’d have some problems
And be retarded, basically.
Today my mommy gave up on me.
You told your boyfriend
That you were pregnant with me
I heard him say “get rid of it--before anyone can see”
Today my mommy chose him over me.
I was a baby,
Now I’ll never be.
Because today my mommy aborted me.
Now we’re all in heaven,
And we’re smiling, you see
Because god took our hands and said
Today your mommy gave you to me.....
2006-11-13 04:47:12 · 20 answers · asked by lifeistough_period 1 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Pregnancy
actually, to answer the last person who answered my question. i grew up with my severely disabled brother for 16 years. and he died last year. but yet he still had a personality, and loved us, and we loved him. and i'm sure, given the choice again, my parents would have raised him all over again. he was still their baby. and still a person, given the right to live.
2006-11-13 05:01:57 · update #1
he was 19.
2006-11-13 05:02:43 · update #2
Great poem, I loved it!
Don't listen to those who say you don't know anything about it. I think your parents made a great choice, and I think you are a wonderful person with an amazing heart... we need more ppl out there like you (and me :) )
2006-11-13 05:02:37 · answer #1 · answered by m930 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-17 05:40:23 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it maybe it will help people realize how wrong abortion is and how precious life is. I have friends who have had abortions and it still haunts them I wouldn't want that for anyone. And for those of you who say you would only do it for medical reasons the doctors told me my daughter was going to be born with severe health problems and limited brain function they recommended termination but although she does have lots of problems she is a beautiful loving child of God who brings joy to our family and everyone who knows her she would have never have been able to share her gifts if she had been aborted! God makes us all in his own image every life is valid.
And this is for sunshine who made you God? Who are you to decide who should live and who should die?
2006-11-13 05:19:23 · answer #3 · answered by aintgivinup79 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Good poem. Cute, and heart warming. But rememebr it is a free country, and women will have abortions. And this is a good poem to show every single one.
Also i have heard this poem before, so if you did write it i would suggest you get a copyright.
2006-11-13 04:51:43 · answer #4 · answered by Holly M 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Easy to "write" a poem that you clearly know nothing about. Do you have children? Are any of them disabled? Or are you a disabled child yourself? You shouldn't ever pass judgement on someone who aborts a child because of a disablilty. Women who use abortions as a form of birth control are very different from a woman who is told that her baby will be born wwith severve deformities or mental retardation and will never have any quality of life. Never be able to eat on their own, see the colors of a rainbow, or pick up a pen to write a poem.
Shame on you.
2006-11-13 04:57:06 · answer #5 · answered by Sunshine 3 · 1⤊ 5⤋
I like it.
Excellent.
personally I would leave the word toilet out saying instead..." You sit, test in hand"
2006-11-13 04:53:13 · answer #6 · answered by DrVodka 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
that poem gave me chills ......... i think it is perfact the way it is it tells the whole story about what happens, thats a very good poem, i do not like abortion i figure if you do the crime you do the time
2006-11-13 04:54:15 · answer #7 · answered by ~♥~Nay~♥~ 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
omg that is great it made me cry.i hope people who are thinking about aboreting will read this and think about what they are about to do.thanks for a great pome that touched my heart.
2006-11-13 04:53:19 · answer #8 · answered by ann p 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I thought it was a very cute poem!
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2006-11-13 05:10:01 · answer #9 · answered by Kimmi (: i ♥ denver nuggets; 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
eh...its something my 8 yr old could have come up with. I would try to get a little more experience with life before you try to take on something like that. Have you ever been in any of those situations? I would bet not.
2006-11-13 05:08:01 · answer #10 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 5⤋