Please Let me know if its Okay or if it sucks.. Bc i dont wanna Recorded it and give him it if it sucks..(I have a beat for it, But just tell me how the words R Okay.)
[Intro/First Verse]
Dreams Only Happen When Ur thinkin In Your Brain,
Look at U Boi Ur Goin insaine,
Now Stop Sayin,
Cuz in Not Playin,
not Gamin,
With you im just Sayin
(Wat a lil and like he beat play a while.....)
[Second verse]
See When We First Started This off, Are realashion ship Was Ruff, Fo me It was tought, N fo you it was like u had enought, See Dat **** wasnt a bluff, Its that da ***** wouldnt send da stuff, you was like "WTF ***** dat's mess'd Up" See b4 Are realashionship was going throught hell,And i didnt wana Fail, so i juss made bail,Soo i called You on ur cell and expland how i felt.asked you for a second try, Cuz its u i want not sumotha Guy.So i juss Sat there and waitd fo ur reply,damn im so happy u felt the same way,I guess that why were so close today..(Its not dont yet cant think)
2006-11-12 17:16:27 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I cannot answer this question honestly because I have no idea what pretty much any of that says
2006-11-12 17:33:34 · answer #1 · answered by SSSSwweeeeett 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first verse sounds rather catchy. Good.
But, the second verse is very messy. Take out the expletives and put less emotion into that verse. Lengthen it out to have a third verse or so (the second, the beginning of the relationship / the third, the present situation)
I still like the first verse. Keep on working on it.
And for Pete's sake, I do hope you're a girl.
2006-11-13 01:23:40 · answer #2 · answered by AxisofOddity 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
er... well, it's kinda okay, i guess. but if it's for ur bf, are u trying to break up wif him or something? u seem to be raking up all the past things that weren't too good, n that's not that good, is it?
2006-11-13 01:22:14 · answer #3 · answered by LAVELLE! :] 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yo homie,I'm not down wit dat ghetto song.
2006-11-13 10:10:57 · answer #4 · answered by Celebrity girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok i answered somthin else to tell u my band myspace and it said it wrong for some reason... its
www.myspace.com
and then, /officiallymenaced
i had to do it in 2 parts so it would say it right
2006-11-13 23:07:23 · answer #5 · answered by Luke J 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its not real original. sorry don't like it but hey i'm not your boyrfriend. It's a nice gesture.
2006-11-13 01:22:28 · answer #6 · answered by Bexx 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its realllly good!!!!!!!!!!!! (if u take out the cussing i think it will be even better) by the way i love kanye west 2!!
2006-11-13 01:32:27 · answer #7 · answered by curious 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
are you speaking english?
2006-11-13 01:18:31 · answer #8 · answered by Perfectly Insane 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH BOYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!
2006-11-13 01:18:34 · answer #9 · answered by aaron g 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋