loneliness envelops each of us
typing tapping on the keyboard
hoping to connect across the aether
hoping to trade sleep for snuggling
to a fantasy
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Now you add the next stanza(s).
2006-11-12 14:17:43 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
where I get lost but found with your arms around me...
warm in your touch
soft from your warmth and high from love....
silence turns golden with body language talking
no need for walking just lay with me.....
the sent in the air so sweet with laughter
and tickle of each others feet..
.simple but real there is no other deal
so complete...
as love ......
quiet and lonely has no friend
so our soul needs to bend
to find that fantasy.......
2006-11-12 15:01:31 · answer #1 · answered by Teenie 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
i like it. I'm not a poet but i'll give it a try:
loneliness envelops each of us
typing tapping on the keyboard
hoping to connect across the aether
hoping to trade sleep for snuggling
to a fantasy
how can so many be so lonely
at the same time
shifting entering on the keyboard
hoping to connect before pressing delete
hoping that fantasy becomes reality
2006-11-12 14:43:31 · answer #2 · answered by sweettee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Loneliness is a state
seeing us as wolves
watching the prey
called loneliness
Loneliness is a body without shadow
eating empty souls
taking them and swallow
and ready to take the next pal
Loneliness is a strange dimension
that few people desire
being the key to genius,poets,and lover's adventures
who want to be solitary?
2006-11-12 14:52:46 · answer #3 · answered by cobrasnake 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Loneliness is very fair
It treats everyone the same
pulling at their heart
Tearing at their soul
Wearing on their minds
Constant and continual
2006-11-12 14:21:24 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
lonieliness ingulfs us all around
we don't know which we to turn
whether to run or to wait for love to come crawling
as we wait here tip tap typing
while watching a computer screen
that us losers will one day not be awnsering
but be asking the quest tions
we will not be ingulfed in our own sorrow and lonliness
it could use some tweaking. tweak it hhow u want.
2006-11-12 14:22:02 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
loneliness seems to last forever
watching waiting for someone to appear
the one we await could be very near
to fulfill the fantasy
2006-11-12 14:26:11 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It
is
so
deep
man
lonliness
.
2006-11-12 14:19:46 · answer #7 · answered by nbasuperdupe 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
of pleasing pleasure
that last til we go limp
to my surprise with dancing eyes
it was only a glimpse
of a wonderful dream
that teases and pleases
and primps with the not trues
so alone I stay hopin...
2006-11-12 14:40:07 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Loneliness, deep down and dark
Like sticks in your throats
Making an obvious mark
Killing your sanity as it dwells withn
your roads.
2006-11-12 14:27:51 · answer #9 · answered by MissIndependanceday 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
hoping their out there
somewhere over the rainbow
wondering and waiting
for that fantasy to come true
2006-11-12 14:22:38 · answer #10 · answered by tinamaries43 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋