Autumn
I know its Autumn when the leaves turn green to red.
I know its Autumn when a Pumpkin pie is baked.
I know its Autumn when the leaves begin to fall.
And when the seasons over I will miss it all.
2006-11-12 08:47:52 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
's great and cute. Red and baked not rhyming make it all the more memorable and since there aren't any commas, it's all the easier to imagine a little girl standing on stage quietly reciting it.
2006-11-12 08:54:46 · answer #1 · answered by Mikey C 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is very nice but there seems to be something missing. I just cant put my finger on it.
maybe:
I know it's Autumn when the leaves turn from green to red.
I know it's Autumn when the smell of pumpkin pie fills my head.
I know it's Autumn when the leaves begin to fall.
And when the seasons over I will miss it all.
2006-11-12 17:01:17 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
That's awesome for a 10 year old :D
2006-11-12 16:55:53 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thanks for sharing -- what a great poem. Your cousin should be proud of herself -- lovely job!
2006-11-12 17:04:15 · answer #4 · answered by ♥ dreamweaver ♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I enjoyed it. She did well!
2006-11-12 17:23:44 · answer #5 · answered by lidstromnumber1fan 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Laugh?? Please!! That was very good for a ten-year-old. Very insightful, can we PLEASE see more? She does have a lot of potential.
2006-11-12 16:59:46 · answer #6 · answered by Lonnie P 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋