Im living on the top floor,
you live on the floor below,
at night you play your guitar,
while I play my radio.
You say you're gonna make it big
some day I'm gonna see
We sware one day we'll leave this place
we'll make it, you and me
Chorus
As long as you're with me I've got the world in my hands
togetehr we can make it, I'll be your biggest fan
So strum on your guitar boy
as I lose myself in thought
Love is all we got boy
but love is more then a lot
Chorus.
Driving down the highway
ona quarter tanks of gas
we don't know where were going
but our worries are in the past.
Leaving behind the small town,
living off of crazy dreams,
one small suitcase in the backseat, but as long as you're with me.
Chorus:
Ngd
Broken donw in Nashville,
waiting to get your chance.
By day you write your music,
and every night we dance.
I count my lucky stars boy
that weve made it to tenneesee
we still dont have much money
but as long as you're here with me
2006-11-12 04:20:44 · 9 answers · asked by teenagewasteland 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
hey thats a great song i needs punctuation and spelling fixes but other than that its great
2006-11-12 04:28:36 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
The song the idea great and I love the lyrics but depending on the melond and tone of the song will make the difference soif you pla n on singing it in a certain calm yet upbeat melody it will sound great just fix spellings and stuff
2006-11-12 04:32:00 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
That is AMAZING!!! I dont care what anyone else says but as long as you have a good voice, your going to be famous, mark my words! I've always tried to write songs and I wont lie, mine were pretty good. but yours are awsome and there's nothing I would change!
2006-11-12 04:35:09 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's a beautiful song. You did a really good job. I hope you make it big and if you do don't forget the person that believed in you. If you got more music email it to me at katigirlg@yahoo.com
2006-11-12 04:32:20 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Since your chorus starts with as long as your here with me..it doesn't work if you end two versus with the same thing. I would change it to "but it's so easy to see" and then the chorus as long as your here with me, i've got the world in my hands..etc.
But it's really good!!!! Record it!
2006-11-12 04:30:35 · answer #5 · answered by skybelle24 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Thats good but u spelled some words wrong but thats was really good...
2006-11-12 04:32:34 · answer #6 · answered by 101 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its great lol so great clapping for u
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dats the clappin'
2006-11-12 04:33:55 · answer #7 · answered by hillarious 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's good
if you play it backwards, does satan leave you alone, your dog hunt well, your momma come back to life, you stop drinkin, and your man becomes faithful to you? (j/k)
I'd record it, probably be a hit!
2006-11-12 04:30:22 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
thats awesome! catchier than hell!
2006-11-12 05:09:08 · answer #9 · answered by bballgurl52lala 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋