her aunt sally who lives by the thames river in london had invited her to come
Corrected: Her Aunt Sally who lives by the Thames River in London had invited her to come.
why did sally want to go to england last thursday
Corrected: Why did Sally want to go to England last Thursday?
my aunt is a writer sally said she just finished a novel called roses and weeds
Corrected: "My aunt is a writer," Sally said, "she just finished a novel called Roses and Weeds."
2006-11-12 01:24:08 · 10 answers · asked by dancer 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Looks fine to me. I hate bad punctuation so I'm always looking out for peoples mistakes!
2006-11-12 01:26:24 · answer #1 · answered by Dannie 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Her aunt Sally, who lives by the Thames River in London, had invited her to come."My aunt is a writer," Sally said,"she just finished a novel called, Roses and Weeds." underline roses and weeds
2006-11-12 09:29:26 · answer #2 · answered by livewire 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think the first one might be better as:
Her Aunt Sally -- who lives by the Thames River in London -- had invited her to come.
...or some such to set the thought about her aunt be itself.
And, for the third, there should be something to indicate that "Roses and Weeds" is a title, such as:
"My aunt is a writer," Sally said, "she just finished a novel called 'Roses and Weeds'."
2006-11-12 09:29:37 · answer #3 · answered by blueowlboy 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
1) Her Aunt Sally, who lives by the Thames River in London, had invited her to come.
2006-11-12 09:29:40 · answer #4 · answered by fadasf 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Her Aunt Sally, who lives by the Thames River in London, had invited her to come.
yhe other one is right
2006-11-12 09:26:37 · answer #5 · answered by dover_luv 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your first one has a slight mispunctuation. It should be, "Her Aunt Sally, who lives by the Thames River in London, had invited her to come." But aside from that, good job!
2006-11-12 09:36:06 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
for the first one it is:
Her Aunt Sally, who lives by the Thames River, invited her to come.
the others are fine
2006-11-12 09:26:47 · answer #7 · answered by EnglishRose... 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"My Aunt is a writer," Sally said. "She just finished a novel called Roses and Weeds."
the rest look good
2006-11-12 09:26:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
The two top ones are right, but I'm not sure about the last one... I think you should only quote "Roses and Weeds"
2006-11-12 09:27:19 · answer #9 · answered by lottie 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
And by that do you mean, punctuated correctly? Or correctly punctuated? Or better, is the punctuation correct?
After you study commas, which are amiss in your sentences, you might look into word order and the proper word use.
2006-11-12 09:30:26 · answer #10 · answered by jackwasthere 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋