Homemade movie trailers here, tell me what you think?

Question

I made these two movie trailers over the summer. I was 15 when I made them. I'm currently working on a Star Wars Episode III trailer and then a JAWS trailer after that.

Terminator 2:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p5vtTsB4UsA

Aliens:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-q7Bk8MG6gc

My critiques would be that I don't like the text on the Terminator trailer, and there were a few words I used that I didn't like but I didn't want to use the same word twice. And I don't have anything bad about the Aliens trailer, but if yall find something I'd like to know. Thanks.

Answer 1

I really really like those mon! The only thing I could maybe add is you need to trim 3 seconds off the Terminator one and add 5 seconds/trim 10 seconds on the Alien one. Commercials have to be in increments of 15 seconds. You're a really talented editor and I'd like to see something you edit in the future. :-)