My own psychological study..no books, no instructor, Just the many combined intellects of Yahoo answers.?

Question

Have you ever felt disdain, but did not care to vent?
Did you feel as if it was in vain, all that time you spent?
In solitude could you feel the weight, of others around the earth?
Has this been a cross you bore, ever since your birth?
Can you look into someones eyes, the only honest view.
And there it is, the window to life,staring back at you!
Were you questioned by many, your ways, your looks, your mind?
Did some mine the minerals in your head, with only rocks to find?
The boulders you used to build a wall, that nothing could destroy,
Your blood and sweat had built that boundary, the stinging wounds annoy.
But as you look at the finished product, a wall built around you.
You realize that now there is no way for anyone to get through!
Into your heart, where you need them most,You turn and walk away,
No matter how alone you feel, each and every day.
Do you begin to tear the wall down, so an entrance may be made?
Or have the toils of all your labor,left you underpaid?

Answer 1

Wow!! Get out of my head!!!
You have a wonderful gift, use it more as you have here, to help others see that they are not alone.

Answer 2

Yes, I like yahoo.com answers? Is that the question?
So I can vent and be mean and no one knows me or cares.
things women can't do in the privacy of our own home.
Because in our homes between kids husbands and grand kids.
there really is no privacy. One misspoken word causes hurt feelings and a fire storm. Here we can say! What? You let that man do what? Take a pill! Drink a glass of water and kick the bum out! Gee, your right I do feel better already.

Answer 3

Your overuse of commas was a little annoying, but I enjoyed your prose. As it happens, I don't build walls, for they only keep me confined. Instead, I build fences. They protect me, but still allow me to share with my neighbors. And by the way, I get paid very well for my toils. Both literally and relatively speaking.

Answer 4

I'll pay you $10 to help me write a poem for my girl

Answer 5

i just put a well locked gate in my wall,, let some pass threw,,,,,,, nice poem

Answer 6

wow! a poet! cool!