Why is it that the heart's content spread before my eyes?Yhe life is as if sympathy has grown before me.The constant thumps in my heart make the beats of thesweet soft voice lingering within me.The rope that binds us together like the warmth of Freya's magic.I must embrace the fate we have in each other .The gaze I stare at you looks like the angelsof rejoice .The arrow that was shot by Eros pierces through my skin bone,and I struggle to pull it out . It goes through my heart until it reaches the center.My heart feels the pain that comes to me. The pain of the rope and arrow binds us and stays with us till the end of our days!
I wrote this poem myself,I am in 5th grade,and the reason for this poem was to give to a girl I liked.She said she didn't want it,said she didn't like me,and she already has a boyfriend.(ouch) I am so bummed out and mad, I stay up till 2:00 am thinking of what I can do. I decided to have one of my friends give it to her.
2006-11-10 18:31:56 · 6 answers · asked by Arthos 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
i think it's great! you did a good job. don't worry too much about this girl....you sound like you are a pretty neat guy. she told you she didn't want your poem, so believe her, pass on giving it to her, but save it for the next girl you fall head over heels for. it's such a sentimental gesture, it deserves to go to someone who appreciates it, and the thought that went into it. good luck!
2006-11-10 18:47:02 · answer #1 · answered by iwondersoiask 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool poem hey heck with her then you dont need her plenty out there and hey fifth grade GO TO BED plenty of time for the ladys during the day!!!!! keep up with yhe poems man ladys be fallin over u someday for em.
2006-11-10 18:47:43 · answer #2 · answered by wolfpack0810 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes well...i wouldn't give it to someone who doesn't like me? And you do know that its highly illegal to "steal" someones written poems and shove it off to others as your own,don't you? Just making sure you know...not accusing you of anything...
2006-11-10 18:43:49 · answer #3 · answered by marleyanne b 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i find it kindda homoish
no offence
i mean im all 4 it if ur a homo
2006-11-10 18:36:32 · answer #4 · answered by ashley 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont know im not a poet but i know its good! XD :D
2006-11-10 18:37:12 · answer #5 · answered by gunmu123 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's great..
very well said..
2006-11-10 18:42:55 · answer #6 · answered by kc 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋