As a tumble weed, or many snowflakes drifted,
Always feeling high strung, as if my weight has shifted,
Riled up over nothing, drawn toward my instinct to be....
Overwhelmed by my desire, to have someone next to me..
Not that I'm shy or all that bad looking, I catch an eye or two....
Cannot I find a woman to warm, when the temp is negative two----
Has the fire burned too low? Have the embers grown too cold?
All I seek is love and what follows, I'm only 32 years old!
Yet to be married, I've played the field, but I'm tired of running the bases...
New love may erase old wounds, And plant a smile on two faces!
Every poem I write is genuine, from my heart, my minds archive...
So my question is simple..Is it healthy to have this drive?
Toward love and warmth and a smiling face....the same one for the rest of my life?
As I watch my scenery pass, I would love to share it with a wife......
Hope you enjoyed it......I'm just bored with the single thingle. Sarcasm not necessary.....
2006-11-10 18:27:27 · 6 answers · asked by 35 YEARS OF INTUITION 4 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
Very nice. Yes I do believe your poem is genuine and from the heart. You will find a wife to share your life with. You are probably being persnickety about your choice. You probably know the word persnickety but look it up in the dictionary. I like to write but have not the talent to translate my feelings in the form of a poem. My husband has that talent and I'm jealous. I'll share one of his poems he wrote of the two of us.
Old Valentine’s
Clinging to one another the old couple moves along,
Memories of youth to share.
Their souls intertwined - among the maddening throng.
The youth they see remind them of their days of yore,
their locks of gray, the hairless crown,
Oh how their minds do soar.
They see a time when they were young,
they met the test of life,
They hope the young of this age - can hold up to the strife.
Remembering their beauty, that age has swiftly passed,
All that remains, the voice, the smile, their laugh.
The old ones remember times that use to be.
The young move along with mighty song. They cannot really see.
Time takes its toll - then they will know, when they wrinkle and ruffle.
Oh yes, they will know, when it’s their turn to shuffle.
I would also like to share my favorite poem. I have framed it and it hangs along side of our marriage license.
Take my hand and walk with me,
across the sands of time;
Hand in hand and heart to heart.
Husband . . . friend of mine.
We will share the solitude.
And walk in quiet peace.
My heart hears what your heart says,
it listens when yours speaks.
We’ve shared hearts and souls as one,
in perfect harmony;
The laughter and the tears we’ve known,
Are the sweetest melody.
For years have brought us to this place.
Across the sands of time;
We’ll walk together, till the end.
Husband . . . friend of mine.
Anonymous
2006-11-10 19:01:51 · answer #1 · answered by DeeJay 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. Unless he was Bill Gates (and wanted to make me a charity case...). Or Bush (Cuz then I'd have a couple of reasons to call). Nice poem. You're good with words.
2016-05-22 04:42:34 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. Maybe you are still single because your standards are so high that no woman can live up to it. You could be overlooking that one woman who could be the perfect person for you because you don't "THINK" you are that attracted to her. Maybe you have a best female friend, she could be the one. Give someone a chance that you normally don't and see where it leads. Good luck!!
2006-11-10 18:51:02 · answer #3 · answered by Jan G 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That was a very sweet poem... I hope that you find someone deserving of it.
2006-11-10 18:35:27 · answer #4 · answered by babydragonspawn 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
not bad, i bet itd be better if i read it outloud because that what poems are for, pretty good
2006-11-10 18:34:21 · answer #5 · answered by ceesteris 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's great!
2006-11-10 18:34:30 · answer #6 · answered by Max 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋