Is this book report ok?

Question

Or should I do something to change? Can you please tell me what to do. Please add some more if you think it's necessary.

The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe
By C.S.Lewis

The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe by C.S.Lewis is a fantasy story about the four Pevensie children and their adventure in the frozen land o f Narnia. The setting of the book is in an old large country house owned by a professor. The story mainly tells about the adventure of the 4 children in the frozen land of Narnia where they make numerous friends with fairy tale like characters.
Peter, Susan, Edmund and Lucy are sent to the countryside due to the air raids in London. They explore the huge house of the old professor. While playing a game of hide and seek on rainy day Lucy hides in a cupboard to find her self in a snow covered land called Narnia. There she befriends a faun, Tumnus who tells her that Narnia is ruled by the White Witch who makes it everlasting winter in Narnia. As he say “Always winter, but never Christmas.” Lucy goes back to her siblings but is unable to convince them.

Few weeks later she re enters the land of Narnia but with her brother Edmund. He fails to catch up with Lucy and meets the White Witch who persuades him to bring his brother and sisters to her castle. Both children depart from Narnia and out of cruelty Edmund doesn’t admit being in Narnia. Finally all 4 children enter Narnia.They discover that Mr. Tumnus has been captured and the children are sheltered by 2 talking beavers. The beavers tell them about the prophecy that when two Sons of of Adam and two Daughters of Eve fill the four thrones at Cair Paravel, the witch's power will fail. The beavers tell of the true king of Narnia Aslan. Edmund, still in the thrall of the witch, runs away to find her. His absence is not noticed until it is too late. Realising that they have been betrayed, the others set off to meet with Aslan.

What else should i write? I cant think!!!!

Answer 1

Sounds good but what about adding some quotes from the book and adding your own ideas like saying why you enjoyed the book (if you did or didnt and why) or ways that the author could have made the book a better read etc??

Just my thoughts sounds pretty good otherwise!!

Answer 2

You have an interesting beginning, but after the first two sentences, it becomes a bore. chronologicalize your paper. first list why they are at the house, then how lucy found the closet. then immediately talk about "with just the right luck, all four siblings found themselves in the magical kingdom of narnia..." don't stress on the details to the point of head-explosion. briefly describe the personalities of the siblings. describe the scenery of the setting of the house & narnia, or even the train station. a book report should allow the audience to "read" the book without reading the book. Good writing though, just ask yourself what pops up first in your head when you are thinking about the book, then write it down. Good luck.

Answer 3

stay in this night. You already benefit an hour there. study the e book and do the checklist. Or, do no longer study the e book and go through the outcomes. in case you have been that worried approximately it, you could have complete the project via now and had a carefree Sunday to appreciate. it is in elementary terms a letter grade besides.

Answer 4

how does the story end? you stopped in the middle. i didnt read the book, but didnt the white witch fool edmund into imprisonment? how was he saved?

also, add a concluding paragraph on whether you liked the book or not, and why. would you recommend the book and why?

Answer 5

why don't u watch the movie and then decide what to add ?