Bianca's Dad tells her that she cannot date until antisocial sister Kat does. Kat is always kicked out of classes for her disagreeable view on every subject and everyone views her as a social outcast. Cameron, the new guy, is mad for Bianca and puts together a plan to get Kat a date. Cameron and his friend Michael get Joey, the popular guy who also likes Bianca, to pay Patrick, a bizarre guy who is rumored to have eaten a live duck and sold his liver. Joey and Kat are enemies and Joey starts to pursue Bianca and Cameron gets upset because he really likes Bianca and wants to take her sailing. Kat wants to go to Sarah Lawrence, a college on the other side of the country but her overprotective father will not let her. Patrick starts to hit on Kat and does all sorts of crazy stuff to get her because he’s getting paid by Joey, including singing in the middle of a Kat's soccer practice. Patrick tells Kat that he really didn’t do all this stuff people say he has. Kat and Patrick eventually fall in love and Joey tells Patrick to make sure Kat goes to the prom so Bianca can go so he can have sex with her. At the prom Kat finds out about the bet and runs off. Bianca realizes what a jerk Joey is at the prom and hooks up with Cameron instead and they go sailing together. Patrick buys Kat a guitar, because she wants to form her own band, and they get back together.
2006-11-10 11:39:25 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Bianca's Dad tells her that she cannot date until antisocial sister Kat does. Kat is always kicked out of classes for her disagreeable view on every subject and everyone views her as a social outcast. Cameron, the new guy, is mad for Bianca and puts together a plan to get Kat a date. Cameron and his friend Michael get Joey, the popular guy who also likes Bianca, to pay Patrick, a bizarre guy who is rumored to have eaten a live duck and sold his liver. Joey and Kat are enemies and Joey starts to pursue Bianca and Cameron gets upset because he really likes Bianca and wants to take her sailing. Kat wants to go to Sarah Lawrence, a college on the other side of the country but her overprotective father will not let her. Patrick starts to hit on Kat and does all sorts of crazy stuff to get her because he’s getting paid by Joey, including singing in the middle of a Kat's soccer practice. Patrick tells Kat that he really did’t do all this stuff people say he has. Kat and Patrick eventually fall in love and Joey tells Patrick to make sure Kat goes to the prom so Bianca can go so he can have sex with her. At the prom Kat finds out about the bet and runs off. Bianca realizes what a jerk Joey is at the prom and hooks up with Cameron instead and they go sailing together. Patrick buys Kat a guitar, because she wants to form her own band, and they get back together.
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2006-11-10 11:41:42 · answer #1 · answered by L™ 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Bianca's Dad tells her that she cannot date until her antisocial sister Kat does. Kat is always kicked out of classes for her disagreeable view on every subject; everyone views her as a social outcast. Cameron, the new guy, is in love with Bianca and puts together a plan to get Kat a date. Cameron and his friend Michael get Joey-the popular guy who also likes Bianca--to pay Patrick--a bizarre guy who is rumored to have eaten a live duck and sold its liver. Joey and Kat are enemies. When Joey starts to pursue Bianca, Cameron becomes upset because he really likes her. Kat wants to visit Sarah Lawrence--a college on the other side of the country--but her overprotective father will not let her. Patrick starts to hit on Kat; he is getting paid by Joey, so he does all sorts of crazy things to get her, including singing in the middle of a Kat's soccer practice. Patrick tells Kat that he really didn’t do all the stuff people say he did. Kat and Patrick eventually fall in love. Joey tells Patrick to make sure that Kat goes to the prom, so that Bianca can go. He wants to fulfill his plan to have sex with her.At the prom Kat finds out about the bet and runs off. Bianca realizes what a jerk Joey is at the prom and hooks up with Cameron instead. Later they go sailing together. Patrick buys Kat a guitar--because she wants to form her own band--and they get back together.
Mostly what this had was run-on sentences, which I fixed as I could. I changed some sentences a little bit to improve the flow. I would suggest starting with a little background information... Hope this helps. Good luck! ;-)
2006-11-10 20:57:48 · answer #2 · answered by msdrosi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bianca's Dad tells her that she cannot date until antisocial sister Kat does. Kat is always kicked out of classes for her disagreeable view on every subject and everyone views her as a social outcast. Cameron, the new guy, is mad for Bianca and puts together a plan to get Kat a date. Cameron and his friend Michael get Joey, the popular guy who also likes Bianca, to pay Patrick, a bizarre guy who is rumored to have eaten a live duck and sold his liver. Joey and Kat are enemies and Joey starts to pursue Bianca and Cameron gets upset because he really likes Bianca and wants to take her sailing. Kat wants to go to Sarah Lawrence, a college on the other side of the country but her overprotective father will not let her. Patrick starts to hit on Kat and does all sorts of crazy stuff to get her because he’s getting paid by Joey, including singing in the middle of a Kat's soccer practice. Patrick tells Kat that he really did’t do all this stuff people say he has. Kat and Patrick eventually fall in love and Joey tells Patrick to make sure Kat goes to the prom so Bianca can go so he can have sex with her. At the prom Kat finds out about the bet and runs off. Bianca realizes what a jerk Joey is at the prom and hooks up with Cameron instead and they go sailing together. Patrick buys Kat a guitar, because she wants to form her own band, and they get back together.
2006-11-10 20:10:14 · answer #3 · answered by yaksterbay.rugby 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bianca's Dad tells her that she cannot date until antisocial sister,Kat, does.Kat is always kicked out of classes for her disagreement in every subject and everyone views her as a social outcast.Cameron,the new guy,is mad for Bianca and developes a plan to get Kat a date.Cameron and his friend,Michael,get Joey,the popular guy who likes Bianca,to pay Patrick,a bizarre guy who was rumored to have eaten a live duck and sold his liver.Joey and Kat are enemies;Joey starts to pursue Bianca,then Cameron gets upset because he really likes Bianca and wants to take her sailing.Kat wants to go Sarah lawrence,a college on the other side of the country, but her overprotective father will not let her.Patrick starts to hit on Kat and does all sorts of crazy stuffs to get her because he's getting paid by Joey,including singing in the middle of Kat's soccer practice.Patrick tells Kat that he really didn't do all the stuffs people say he did.Kat and Patrick eventually fall in love and Joey tells Patrick to make sure Kat goes to the prom so that Bianca can go and have sex with him.At the prom,Kat finds out about the bet and runs off.Bianca realizes what a jerk Joey is at the prom and hooks up with Cameron and they go sailing together.Patrick buys Kat a guitar because she wants to form her own band,and they get back together.
2006-11-10 20:04:25 · answer #4 · answered by Phy A 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bianca's Dad tells her that she cannot date until antisocial sister Kat does. Kat is always kicked out of classes for her disagreeable view on every subject, and everyone views her as a social outcast. Cameron, the new guy, is mad for Bianca and puts together a plan to get Kat a date. Cameron and his friend Michael get Joey, the popular guy who also likes Bianca, to pay Patrick, a bizarre guy who is rumored to have eaten a live duck and sold his liver. Joey and Kat are enemies and Joey starts to pursue Bianca and Cameron gets upset because he really likes Bianca and wants to take her sailing. Kat wants to go to Sarah Lawrence, a college on the other side of the country, but her overprotective father will not let her. Patrick starts to hit on Kat and does all sorts of crazy stuff to get her, including singing in the middle of Kat's soccer practice. Patrick tells Kat that he didn’t really do all the stuff people say he did. Kat and Patrick eventually fall in love. Joey tells Patrick to make sure Kat goes to the prom, so Bianca can go and he can have sex with her. At the prom Kat finds out about the bet and runs off. Bianca realizes what a jerk Joey is. She then hooks up with Cameron and they go sailing together. Patrick buys Kat a guitar, because she wants to form her own band, and they get back together.
2006-11-10 20:03:19 · answer #5 · answered by Dr Know It All 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bianca's dad tells her that she cannot date until her anti-social sister Kat does. Kat is always kicked out of classes for her disagreeable view on every subject and everyone thinks of her as a social outcast. Cameron, the new guy, is upset for Bianca and puts together a plan to get Kat a date. Cameron and his friend Michael get Joey, who happens to be popular and like Bianca, to pay Patrick, a bizzare guy who is rumored to have eaten a live duck and sold it's liver. Joey and Kat are enemies, Joey starts to pursue Bianca, and Cameron gets upset because he really likes Bianca and wants to take her sailing. Patrick starts to hit on Kat and does all sorts of crazy stuff to get her. After all, he was being paid by Joey. Patrick even told her that he had never done anything everyone said he had. Eventually, the two fall in love, so Joey tells Patrick to make sure Kat goes to the prom. The only reason he had said that was so that he could have sex with Bianca. At the prom, Kat finds out about the agreement, and runs off. Finally Bianca realizes what a jerk Joey is and decides to hook up with Cameron. Cameron was never happier, because, he got to take her sailing. One day, Patrick knocks on the door with a guitar for Kat, who wanted to start a band. They decide to get back together.
I added the corrections right into the story. There were only a few changes, except at the end, because it was a little choppy.
2006-11-10 20:28:38 · answer #6 · answered by peace ♥ music 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
People before me caught most, but use Bianca's father.
2006-11-10 20:11:00 · answer #7 · answered by David S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋