jubilation
the dance and wine
theyr screams and shouts once so divine
rude and reckless they turns the wheel
of fate and future tought theyr views conceald
hesitation hinders and take its toll
swaying and falling with no control
the avalanche of no future transless into aimlessness
the foundation of whole mankind
crumbles to a point of no return
2006-11-10 08:28:21 · 4 answers · asked by last spiritual man 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
It's excellent, so good luck with the song, and hopefully, no one on this site will copy it.
2006-11-10 08:32:56 · answer #1 · answered by Montez Grl 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think you're trying to say too much.
I prefer simpler more sublime things.
2006-11-10 16:35:15 · answer #2 · answered by the Boss 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweetness.
2006-11-10 16:36:07 · answer #3 · answered by Amelia<3 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it!!!!!!!!
2006-11-10 16:31:06 · answer #4 · answered by cuty cute 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋