I wish you knew this other ride
Travels to a different side
Where everything just seems to be slowing
But the miles just keep on rolling
The road fades midnight black and blue
But chances are you have no clue
Most come here to post
Others to just get lost
To disappear
And then reappear
With clearer thoughts in pursue
But chances are you have no clue
I’m back on this road again
Allied with my very best friend
Penciling all the things I lack
And all the things I got right on track
All my missed chances
All those so close dances
And how those dreamy dreams almost came true
But chances you have no clue
2006-11-09 18:30:41 · 16 answers · asked by Ct_noicS 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Scale of 1 - 10
1 = bad
10 = good
2006-11-09 18:47:26 · update #1
Nice, I enjoyed the way you tied together the last lines in each paragraph.
2006-11-09 18:36:54 · answer #1 · answered by Steph 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Scale of 1 to 10 about an 8.
2006-11-10 02:37:44 · answer #2 · answered by kralen 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
2006-11-10 02:37:25 · answer #3 · answered by feather 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats a really nice poem. I'd give it about 9 - 10
2006-11-10 02:51:17 · answer #4 · answered by Andy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, on a scale of 1 to 10...8, its pretty good
what's the title?
2006-11-10 02:38:42 · answer #5 · answered by anna 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A good poem. I rate it a 9.
2006-11-10 03:21:06 · answer #6 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like that poem. I do. And for that reason alone, I will give it a 10.
2006-11-10 02:43:48 · answer #7 · answered by Hey Polly 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A+
2006-11-10 02:36:23 · answer #8 · answered by phudge 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo, :) needs some editing,, care to give a clue? i'll listen
2006-11-10 02:36:36 · answer #9 · answered by joyfulone 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry to be too much of a critic, i say, 5 out of 10, i mean "dreamy dreams", is not that a bit too cliche?
2006-11-10 02:33:42 · answer #10 · answered by Shadowfyre 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋