if u got somethin bad to say...do me a favor........ dont bother writin k....k
Now i know your moving away im thinkin how im going to pursuade u to stay we were buddies in 4 and 5 grade im lost what am i goin to do i need to make it up to u who goin to be there when im feelin blue you were the one who helped me through when i found out we might be cousins i was so happy but if we dont ever see each other again i know i might sound a little gay but i might as well say i will still love you anyway i want to say goodbye instead i'll say see you intil NEXT TIME
2006-11-09 09:43:02 · 3 answers · asked by ~!~Dat Gurl Kelz~!~ 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
That's not a poem. It's not even prose. It's more like a rant in a letter. If you want to make it a poem, make it poetic by expressing your feelings in shorter lines, imagery, metaphors and similies. It's not really pretty decent. Sorry. It's more like "blah."
2006-11-09 09:46:16 · answer #1 · answered by Kristen H 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
descent?? did you mean DECENT? NEXT THING... It's not a poem... it's a RUN ON SENTENCE!!! without even a period at the end. Duuuuuhhhhh... can you spell stupid??
2006-11-09 17:50:41 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a nice poem.............
2006-11-09 17:52:57 · answer #3 · answered by sosoqueen 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋