Satisfaction, enjoyment, and feeling victorious are the results of doing your best.
Is that correct? I thought perhaps the parallel series wasn't right, but idk...any help?
2006-11-09 06:47:00 · 10 answers · asked by Josh 5 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
There's nothing wrong with your sentence.
2006-11-09 06:55:15 · answer #1 · answered by Jack430 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would say "Feeling satisfaction, enjoyment and victorious are the results of doing your best."
Good luck
2006-11-09 06:55:56 · answer #2 · answered by ♥♥♥ Mommy to Two ♥♥♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would say:
Feeling of satisfaction, enjoyment, and victory are the results of doing your best.
2006-11-09 06:50:53 · answer #3 · answered by jenivive 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
hummm That's tough should it be...
Satisfaction, enjoyment, and feeling victorious is the result of doing your best.
Maybe I'm wrong...otherwise i can't see what's wrong with it
2006-11-09 06:50:29 · answer #4 · answered by graciegirl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds and looks good to me...except I think a comma goes after victorious...
2006-11-09 06:56:08 · answer #5 · answered by flip103158 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you want, just change 'the' to 'all'. I think that would sound better. And possibly 'your' to 'one's'.
2006-11-09 06:56:08 · answer #6 · answered by luke b 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I might put "are all results of..."
2006-11-09 06:56:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that you should say either:
1) ...............is the result....................
or
2) ...............are all results....................
That's what I think. But there are other solutions as well.
2006-11-09 07:04:16 · answer #8 · answered by Alexei 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is right.... it seems right to me..
2006-11-09 06:49:17 · answer #9 · answered by xochelsxo16 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think you have it perfectly stated....
2006-11-09 06:49:36 · answer #10 · answered by snvffy 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋