Check out my website http://jcpure.bravehost.com, what do you think? I still gotta work on it a bit but please tell me how it is so far!
2006-11-09 04:57:34 · 5 answers · asked by StarWarsFanatic 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I like your background. The text is fairly easy to read.
However, they say that you should not put too much text on your opening page. Studies show that people don't like to scroll down pages very much.
My suggestion is that you might want to break it up some. Maybe put your "What is Pure Jesus" on the opening and the rest link to.
Next, in looking at your source (the HTML behind the scenes) you don't have any keywords. You will never get listed on search engines without keywords.
All in all, not bad.
2006-11-09 05:04:17 · answer #1 · answered by ktan_the_siren 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I've been there and I'm writing from Ghana. Your site has a great objective...making us be Pure Jesus. That's lovely, even in God's sight...I presume.
But you can do more. Improve on the design, the content and the presentation.
Secondly, don't make it a male show. Include the Blessed Virgin Mary, the woman who declared "...I am the handmaid of the Lord. Be it done unto me according to thy will". I think it's a striking path she sets out for us to become like her Son.
Be blessed.
2006-11-09 05:09:40 · answer #2 · answered by tita l 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The fist page is awesome! I love the design and the message! But I really like themes. When you try different links they are no where related to the first page. That's just me. I can tell you really worked hard on it. Good job!
2006-11-09 05:00:49 · answer #3 · answered by Deana S 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Looks good, very nice layout, however the W3C Html validator shows 13 errors.
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fjcpure.bravehost.com%2F
2006-11-09 05:01:12 · answer #4 · answered by Farnsworth 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your site is cool I like it well done good jod
2006-11-09 05:02:52 · answer #5 · answered by Foxy lady 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋