Try being a new girl at a new school in a completely new town. That’s what Madison thought when she had to move after her house was destroyed by hurricane Katrina. Now she had to meet her new friends, new teachers and possibly new enemies……. Who can she trust with her deepest darkest secret?
What do you think? Will it Sell?
2006-11-09 04:25:13 · 7 answers · asked by chattergirl93 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I think it needs some work, but the basic idea is good. The first line doesn't sound right, the word "new" is too repetative. Try this:
"When Madison's life is turned upside down by Hurricane Katrina, she is forced to move to a new town. Now she is met with even more difficult battles when she has to meet new friends, teachers and possibly, new enemies. In a place where she doesn't know who to trust, who will keep her secret?"
2006-11-09 04:39:02 · answer #1 · answered by Ophelia 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would definately buy it..... Im into this kinda stuff.... it should sell, but watch out for the "first page readers" you need to have the first and last chapter Really good also....
2006-11-09 12:33:48 · answer #2 · answered by Shawnee 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no. now she had isn't even correct english which would lead me to believe that nothing inside the cover & back is written correctly either.
2006-11-09 12:33:25 · answer #3 · answered by autumn 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah it sounds good to me
2006-11-09 12:32:36 · answer #4 · answered by GD-Fan 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. It tells you a bit and gets you to read it so you can get the answer
2006-11-09 12:28:20 · answer #5 · answered by Love, Joy, peace.. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good to me!
2006-11-09 12:33:54 · answer #6 · answered by kait 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its pretty good, not great though.
2006-11-09 12:38:18 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋