I'm writing a short story for my class, how would I write this out?

Question

This Guy kills this girls friend in front of her eyes, how would you write out her scream?

Answer 1

No, don't ever do that, actually write out the stupid scream. It looks lame. If there was a huge landslide in your story, would you write, "Grr..rumble rumble!"? You're better off describing her scream. For example, you can write, "She screamed and cried, saying, "No!"". Whatever. Just don't write, "Ahhhhhh!". That's out.

Answer 2

Example:
"The Murderer" plunged his knife deep into the girls chest the sound of her last gasp filling the air. Blood poured from her chest as her eyes looked up still and emotionless. Her best friends stood there her mouth open and eyes wide. Her body shook as she looked at her dead friend. Instantly she began to scream. She screamed so loud, loud enough to break glass. Her mouth wide open and her eyes now shut she screamed for her life and for the life of her friend. Anyone around her could hear the ear piercing scream. The murderer covered his ears as she screamed her face turning bright red as tears spilled down her face. Letting out his own roar of anger he headed towards the girl knife in hand.

The grammar is probably horrible, but there is an example of a scream. hope i helped

Answer 3

Yes - describe the scream, the effect of the scream, the aftermath of the scream, what the screamer feels as she screams, etc.

Good luck and what great fun!!!

Answer 4

I'd start with learning how to punctuate your story line. I had to read it three times to get it.

Answer 5

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


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