it's a sentence translated into english. does it sound good? natural?
if not can you suggest any words expressions?
thanks a lot:)
THE SENTENCE:
Apart from putting a lot of effort and achieving some success in this range, as of today we cannot talk about fully coordinated and consistently carried out by the EU eastern policy
2006-11-09 00:55:09 · 14 answers · asked by AsMa 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Sound good... I would not make any changes..
=)
2006-11-09 01:08:53 · answer #1 · answered by »-Mia-» 5 · 0⤊ 3⤋
Here's my effort:
Apart from having put in a lot of effort and achieving some success in this range, as of today we still cannot talk about fully coordinated and consistently carried out EU eastern policy.
2006-11-12 06:14:27 · answer #2 · answered by mini metro 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As of today, we cannot talk about a fully coordinated and consistent Eastern Policy carried out by the EU. We must put a lot of effort into achieving some success in this area.
2006-11-09 09:11:11 · answer #3 · answered by drammy22 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Apart from putting a lot of effort and some success into this range, as of today we cannot talk about the fully coordinated and consistency carried out by the EU Eastern Policy
2006-11-09 09:03:59 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Apart from putting a lot of effort and achieving some success in this range, as of today we can no longer talk about fully coordinated and consistently carried out by the EU eastern policy
2006-11-09 09:03:11 · answer #5 · answered by tattooedgray 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Apart from putting in a lot of effort to achieve some success in this range, we cannot (as of today) talk about a fully co-ordinated and consistently carried out EU eastern policy.
2006-11-09 09:10:20 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
In my opinion, there's something missing in your paragraph, but I can't discern what. These are my changes:
Apart from putting a lot of effort into and achieving some success in this range, as of today we cannot talk about fully coordinated and consistent issues carried out by the EU eastern policy.
THE SENTENCE:
Apart from putting a lot of effort and achieving some success in this range, as of today we cannot talk about fully coordinated and consistently carried out by the EU eastern policy
2006-11-09 09:08:26 · answer #7 · answered by Lisa T 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
As of today we cannot talk about a fully coordinated and consistently carried out EU eastern policy despite putting in a lot of effort and having achieved some success.
2006-11-09 09:06:00 · answer #8 · answered by Nimbus 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Your sentence does not make sense.
Are you trying to say that despite a lot of effort and some limited success, there is no coordinated, consistent EU policy on Eastern Europe?
2006-11-09 09:05:24 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
.... as of today we cannot talk about it being fully coordinated and consistently carried out by the EU eastern policy.
2006-11-09 08:58:24 · answer #10 · answered by brianthesnailuk2002 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Its too frilly. You're using too many words. Try not to use several words when one would suffice. The grammar and syntax need attention.
2006-11-09 16:49:48 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋