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Can you come up with a poem about patience. Try to make it 9 lines. If I like it you will be chosen for best answer. IT DOESN' T HAVE TO RYME.

2006-11-08 13:59:06 · 8 answers · asked by Ms. Honest 3 in Education & Reference Homework Help

8 answers

Patience is kindness.
Your patience,
your kindness,
is all too much for me.
I am in a haze of shame
as I stumble and fall.
You laugh at my clumsy mistakes
but always help me get up again.
One day,
when I grow up,
I wanna be just like you.
You and your unwavering patience.

writing poems are HARD!!!! >o<

2006-11-08 14:06:30 · answer #1 · answered by stella646 2 · 0 0

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2016-10-21 12:29:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

1st write down what happens to u physically next write what things u think of when u think of this emotion, next if the emotion had a color what would it be?,next, ellimate anything tht doesnt add to the over all feeling you are explaining, consider this ur brainstorming and put ur words in to phrases the whole idea of poetry is to say a lot of thing in a lil amount of words.

2006-11-08 14:10:38 · answer #3 · answered by = )Chloe( = 1 · 0 0

1.)Patience, Patience
2.)Why are you so lame, [S] [H] [I ][T]!
3.)Wastin my time,
4.)Freakin out my mind,
5.)People tell me I need more of you
6.)But know what I tell them? [f] [u] [c] [k] you foo!
7.)I'll never be on yo side,
8.)Who cares whether I live or die?
9.)I dont care bout u, u momma, or your auntie too!!

2006-11-08 14:11:10 · answer #4 · answered by Michelle 3 · 0 0

Patience, I ask for you.
As I wait for impatiens-
I grow for my patients.
Dammit, now impatient!

2006-11-08 14:41:57 · answer #5 · answered by nikirr 2 · 0 0

Here is one that my mother always said:

Patience is a virtual, keep it if you can, mostly in a woman, seldom in a man.

2006-11-08 14:09:03 · answer #6 · answered by irish_yankee51 4 · 0 0

I probably could. Can you?

2006-11-08 14:06:49 · answer #7 · answered by tamesbadger 3 · 0 0

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