Key to Your Heart
What was to me just a simple key,
Stolen out of cute flirtation
Would evolve into much more
A feeling – a thought – a small sign
A symbol of what you would steal from me
My heart
You would steal my heart
and every emotion hence forth
My attention and care
now devoted to you
Now my subject of thought
My muse of mind
My absolute adoration
Which I willingly show
Now entranced with the idea of your affection
It's not finished by I want to know if I'm off to a good start
2006-11-08 13:27:04 · 34 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I really like it. Great start!
2006-11-08 13:29:01 · answer #1 · answered by Ragdoll 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
6
2006-11-08 13:28:06 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Definately a 9.
2006-11-09 02:19:12 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
10!
2006-11-08 13:40:05 · answer #4 · answered by Bebe1016 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a nice poem. I would give it a 10 because of the time and effort you must have put in the poem. Great job!
2006-11-08 13:34:24 · answer #5 · answered by Susie B 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
We will never be able to express to you how the one you are writing this for will absolutely adore this and I'm sure will adore you. It was very kind of you to express to her the way that you feel. That is such a better gift than anything money could buy.
2006-11-08 14:57:16 · answer #6 · answered by shanstew 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
get rid of this line "You would steal my heart" and the rest of it will flow better. Well, that's my opinion anyway. But it has a good start otherwise. Keep it coming! Email me the finished version.
2006-11-08 13:41:06 · answer #7 · answered by faerie queen 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg, that is so good! *sniff sniff* ok not really that touching i have a heart of stone, but that's better than most of the poems i've ever read. on a:
1-5 scale: 4.5-4.6
1-10 scale: 9
1-100 scale: 94
2006-11-08 13:31:02 · answer #8 · answered by cloouvgeh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's good. any poem you write that has meaning to you is a good one. i don't usually share my poetry cause how it makes me feel may have no affect on someone else. if i feel an emotional release after i've written, then i know it's worth a lot. keep writing. you're doing great!!
2006-11-08 13:35:49 · answer #9 · answered by ididElvis 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10!!!! i can relate to it. it's beautiful. anyone else who relates lower does not understand the struggles of writing a poem. ive tried to write poems..generally im good at writing but it's very hard, i suck. way better than what i write. i envy your talent. and with a little proofreading you could get that published..and if not it deserves to be.
2006-11-08 13:44:49 · answer #10 · answered by Garbo's snowflake 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'll assume that the best answer will be given to whoever gives the highest rating and expect that not to be me, seeing as I give it a 3.
2006-11-08 13:36:35 · answer #11 · answered by the_horrible_thunderpants 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋