My home is where…
Special memories take place
I wake up from the smell of my mother’s delicious cooking
The real me shows itself,
Big decisions are made
I feel secure.
My home is where…
I return to every night after a long day
I can wake up and not worry about the way my hair looks,
I can forget about my outside problems
I know I will not be judged,
My heart is content.
My home is where…
I can eat anytime,
I can make a mess without worrying about it
No one can tell me to turn down the radio when it’s too loud,
I can dance ‘till it hurts
I am relaxed.
My home is…
Like a safe little world inside of a bigger world,
Surrounded by love.
Where family and friends get together t0o have a good time
The place I want to be when I’m sitting in first period half asleep
My friend.
My home…
Calls out to me when I am away for too long,
Shields me from the outside world,
Always has its arms wide open
Has seen every side of me,
Is the place I know best.
2006-11-08 12:47:17 · 10 answers · asked by some1 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
it is an excellent poem.I like it .good job.well-done
2006-11-08 12:52:01 · answer #1 · answered by peterwan1982 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very good. I like it. It shows that you are very happy and content with your family and home, that home for you is a safe and comfortable and secure haven, a place you will always want to go back to.
One of my favorite quotes, "Home is where, when you go there, they have to take you in."
Good job!
2006-11-08 12:50:57 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
What a lovely, heart-felt poem. I enjoyed reading it!
You might want to consider posting it to one or more of the many writers or poet's forums on the net.
2006-11-08 12:50:47 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very well written. You should continue going into poetry.
2006-11-08 12:51:36 · answer #4 · answered by I think... 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yea its great
2006-11-08 12:48:26 · answer #5 · answered by pjd 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think your teacher will love it!
2006-11-08 12:49:08 · answer #6 · answered by judy_r8 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it!
2006-11-08 12:48:58 · answer #7 · answered by Lori 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it is really good, hey i might hear it on the radio one day!!!!!!!!!
2006-11-08 12:50:39 · answer #8 · answered by xoluvergrlox 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
good..go on.
2006-11-08 12:50:45 · answer #9 · answered by snns_m 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
good
2006-11-08 13:03:42 · answer #10 · answered by phyllis_neel 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋