Here is my story:
As I lay their, on the cold soggy ground. Blood gushing form my forhead. The hard fall to the ground had scraped all my skin off, and now only showed bone.The blood blurred me vision. All I can see is red. Pain is shooting up my leg from my ankel. I must have broke it. I try to get up but the pain is way to fierce! My vision is going fuzzy. I think I am going to pass-out. I do.
I awake awhile later. Its so dark out. The full moon is just now peaking above the tree tops. I should have never run away. It wasn't that bad.....Yes it was. ( ...................................................................................................................................................................) I can't beleived this happened.
2006-11-08 12:45:31 · 6 answers · asked by sammydoobean 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
What should have happened for my character to runaway? Fill in the dotted lines.
2006-11-08 12:46:09 · update #1
She was with her parents and annoying little brother when all the sudden, while on her hike, something hit her on the head and she went rolling down the very steep hill side next to the path. When she gets to the bottm she figures out that she is badly injured but can still walk, but with a little bit of a limp. When she stands up she is next to a cave and inside she sees two big, green eyes looking right at her. She stops breathing and stands perfectly still. It starts to growl and she sees it bare its huge, yellow teeth at her. All the sudden it puoces out of the cave and roars into the sky, standing on its back legs. She flinches at its frightning appearence and hungrey stare as it growls and steps closer and closer to her. It was an ugly, huge beast looking all most like a wolf, but four times the size of an average wolf. It is on all fours, but has human like qualities in its posture, which she happened to notice while standing there a second away from screaming for dear life. " I'm too young to die . . . I'm too young to die . ," she keeps on repeating to herself as it approaches her. Now it is close enough that she can feel its breath on her face. She tries to step backward without it noticing. CRACK! goes a pile of twigs sitting in a arangement behind her. She runs panting and crying from the pain of her body. She doesn't turn back to see if it is there, but just keeps on running through all the trees and over brookes. She knows that it is behind her running faster than she can, dodging all the trees behind her. It must have givven her a head start, for surely by know he would have caught up.
2006-11-12 08:20:19 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
As I lay their, on the cold soggy ground. Blood gushing form my forehead. The hard fall to the ground had scraped all my skin off, and now only showed bone.The blood blurred me vision. All I can see is red. Pain is shooting up my leg from my ankle. I must have broke it. I try to get up but the pain is way to fierce! My vision is going fuzzy. I think I am going to pass-out. I do.
I awake awhile later. Its so dark out. The full moon is just now peaking above the tree tops. I should have never run away. It wasn't that bad.....Yes it was. ( I shouldn't have yelled like that, she didn't deserve what i did. He was a lying cheating jerk, but she was not...how could I have done what I did. Why did I go off on her like that? She never knew! And I hurt her...I hit her. I never should have done this...I can't believed this happened... to me...to her...why?
2006-11-08 12:58:16 · answer #2 · answered by IyLoOuVsEuYcOkU 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe your individual can particularly be from a pleased loved ones and needs to go away for an journey when you consider that she's lived a comfy and sheltered lifestyles. Perhaps a love curiosity observed her infantile and ignorant, so she made up our minds to check out to survive her possess, see the wider international, develop up mentally and end up mature within the eyes of her love however encounters problems alongside the best way.
2016-09-01 09:30:25 · answer #3 · answered by swindell 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hmmm-- it's a full moon. Maybe the person is running from a vampire or werewof, or maybe they just *think* someone is a vampire or werewolf.
2006-11-08 13:03:25 · answer #4 · answered by Ms. Switch 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If it's a girl it could be because she was being abused-by a parent or a boyfriend.
2006-11-08 13:42:54 · answer #5 · answered by NYC_grl_2004 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They dared their friend to do something dangerous and it ended up killing that person.
i dunno. i tried...
2006-11-08 12:59:31 · answer #6 · answered by lulu 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋