check my rap aight yall?!?

Question

Beef? i handle mine, when i get my hands on nines, like a famous person i shine, except with me its with my grind, sellin crack and packin the mac, puttin snitches down on they backs. Girls screamin my name like ladies relax! you all gonna get ya turn, like usher, let it burn! i say when im rollin my blunts, puttin a hurtin on fine ladies K u n t s.
I got yellow diamonds in my ears, call them lemon heads, lemon red, iced out like winnipeg. I break ya leg, more than tipsy, consumed half a keg me and my homie craig, from the east side, where we ride, and yall cowards hide when i come through on the block, nah im not a commercial artist like young joc, i keep it real, i keep tha deal, not with interscope but with the streets, where we packin the heat, cookin up raw, meat on the grill, your blood will spill if ya snitch from me, you'll end up in the ditch from me. Listen to what i say, get rich from me, sellin drugs, bumpin mugs, on paroll since 1994 i commit the crimes...

Answer 1

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Answer 2

It's too un-original. I'd give it a 5 on a 1-10 scale.

Answer 3

omg!! ur so talented. I like it so much even though i'm not a rap person. But hey...who knows maybe you'll be famous some day....well keep it up and hope i see ya on tv!!! goodluck

Answer 4

Uhh yeah whens the single come out

Answer 5

I would love to hear that thumpin' in the trunk of a station wagon

Answer 6

A perfect 10,...

Answer 7

well....its prolly good to people who listent to rap, but overall i give it about a 8 out of 10

Answer 8

Sorry, it's still nearly illegible & what I can read really isn't what I would call quality.

Answer 9

Stick to your day job no offense.

Answer 10

Sounds fimilar but its cool me like it. is it cam ron?

Answer 11

thaz hot