Beef? i handle mine, when i get my hands on nines, like a famous person i shine, except with me its with my grind, sellin crack and packin the mac, puttin snitches down on they backs. Girls screamin my name like ladies relax! you all gonna get ya turn, like usher, let it burn! i say when im rollin my blunts, puttin a hurtin on fine ladies K u n t s.
I got yellow diamonds in my ears, call them lemon heads, lemon red, iced out like winnipeg. I break ya leg, more than tipsy, consumed half a keg me and my homie craig, from the east side, where we ride, and yall cowards hide when i come through on the block, nah im not a commercial artist like young joc, i keep it real, i keep tha deal, not with interscope but with the streets, where we packin the heat, cookin up raw, meat on the grill, your blood will spill if ya snitch from me, you'll end up in the ditch from me. Listen to what i say, get rich from me, sellin drugs, bumpin mugs, on paroll since 1994 i commit the crimes...
2006-11-08 09:10:26 · 5 answers · asked by Silly Big Man 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Other - Cultures & Groups
Your rap is exactly like any other on the airwaves today.
If that is the effect youwere going for, I'd say good job, but, personally, I feelthat the subject is not stimulating or attention-grabbing. To 'make it' out there, you'll have to be a bit more original.
You have a good rhyme technique there though.
You know what would be really cool? If you could write a rap about other topics besides the usual showing off, life in the ghetto, beef etc.
That is why Eminem is so popular. He doesn't limit his talent to the usual. Think about it.
Good luck.
2006-11-08 09:22:14 · answer #1 · answered by strawberrysocks 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Step your game up! You sound like every other stereotype ridden rapper out there! Guns, drugs, and "puttin a hurtin' on fine ladies K u n t s" is not original. And its not cute or cool either. Why don't you rap about getting a job with benefits and a 401 K plan? Then I'll be impressed. But as of right now... this sh*t sucks! You sound extrememly ignorant and this is why REAL hip hop gets the bad wrap it does today. Because of whack a s s wanna be thugs like you.
2006-11-08 17:36:36 · answer #2 · answered by *karasi* 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
What is the world coming to??? Listen I like rap and all since thats what I mostly listen to but you need to change the negative things you rap about.
2006-11-08 18:05:22 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Get a life
2006-11-08 17:14:26 · answer #4 · answered by the_reverend_billy_b 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
lol good its actually interesting sorta cuz its funny.....u sound like ur trying to hard to b ghetto or something and ur not or something tho.....lol.
2006-11-08 17:14:52 · answer #5 · answered by Heidi 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋