I need to write a mini-memoir. Which of the following sentences will make a good, interesting beginning sentence? (If none are good please suggest one, or correct some.)
By the way, my mini-memoir is about the time I went to camp.
SENTENCE CHOICES:
1) I had never been to a camp before.
2) I had never been to a camp before, let alone an aviation training camp.
3) My first experience in camp was a fantastic one.
4) “TOP GUN”. I achieved this status when I went to Space Camp.
5) “Ready, set, go!” The battle had begun.
6) One of my best memories was the time I went to camp.
any suggestions????
2006-11-07 20:05:33 · 6 answers · asked by harunaf321 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Try "Space camp for girls? You bet! I had the best time of my life learning new skills and gaining memories to last a lifetime."
Good luck.
Dan.
2006-11-07 20:33:52 · answer #1 · answered by Dan S 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Either 2 or 6 I would have to say. The reason is because 4 & 5 are more were the heck am I? 1 & 3 aren't really opening sentences, I mean really after that sentence you would have pretty much come up with another leading sentence. Good luck!
2006-11-07 20:37:43 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-15 12:39:45 · answer #3 · answered by anthiathia 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Make your first sentence catchy. Never mind, everyone knows that. Anyway, when readers read your first sentence, it should contain something slightly interesting, so they can continue reading. Good Luck!
2006-11-07 21:10:58 · answer #4 · answered by screwbothheadphones 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
4) and 5) are the best - The first line has to be punchy otherwise the marker will get bored.
2006-11-07 20:09:45 · answer #5 · answered by Bubble 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Last one is a good beginning
2006-11-07 20:10:40 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋