"Red water" i wrote this in like 10 minutes, i'm singing it at my next concert.
she looks into the mirror
all she see's is pain and hate
memories of a painful life
hatred, lies and rape
she turns on the water
and puts her clothes aside
she steps into the bath
hoping to wash away the pain she tries to hide
she only wishes to be happy
and someone to hold her tight
just a shoulder to cry on
for someone to make it alright
she's tired of being hurt
life is just getting harder
she's made up her mind
out flow's the red water
sadness and memories fill her thoughts
tears pour down her face
she prays to the lords above
please take me to a better place
a world full of hate soon fade's to black
as she starts to drift away
red water drips onto the floor
its just another same sad day
2006-11-07 14:57:07 · 9 answers · asked by Perfectly Insane 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
please tell me what you like and don't like.
2006-11-07 17:53:57 · update #1
finally someone who wrote it right. the best feelings to describe next to love and hate is sadness. and you nipped it in the butt. and before i completely submerged myself in your lyrics i began to wonder where was your message, and BANG! it was right at the end. i give a 5 out of 5. just don't sing it at a wedding.
2006-11-07 15:07:32 · answer #1 · answered by Eryc 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
whoa. that was awesome. just change the first pain to something else, cause if your gonna have painful right after it, it kind of defeats the purpose if you know what I mean. Oh, and the same thing with hate/hatred, but otherwise, thats awesome.
2006-11-07 23:00:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's a good song. It's really heavy and makes the listener really feel for the girl in it.
2006-11-07 22:59:18 · answer #3 · answered by Ms. H 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I love it!!!! send me a DEMO or dowlload to TreasureIsland.Gold@yahoo.com Ps are you a singer/artist?
let me hear it.. I am serious bye Larry
2006-11-07 23:00:54 · answer #4 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I DON'T WANT ANY WOMAN WHO HAS BEEN RAPED TO GO TAKE A BATH...GO TO THE EMERGENCY ROOM...
What kind of messege are you sending?
Is she killing herself too?
Rape and suicide...lovely!
2006-11-07 23:02:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW! Pretty amazing piece of work.
2006-11-07 23:27:31 · answer #6 · answered by APACHE 7 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
you do a good job. i am into it
2006-11-07 23:04:50 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
honestly . ............ I'm a little scared
2006-11-07 23:00:14 · answer #8 · answered by *PEACE BEGINS WITH A SMILE* 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i really like it!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-11-07 23:08:35 · answer #9 · answered by *MRS>TOM BRADY* 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋