The story is about. A girl name Sue goes missing at the mall.The topic sentence "Sue is missing at the mall."At the end of the story Sue's friends found her beat up in the restroom.Can you help me write a story.
2006-11-07 12:58:29 · 7 answers · asked by cosmogirl 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
THE STORY HAS TO BE AT LEAST ONE PARAGRAPH OR MAYBE MORE.
2006-11-07 12:59:17 · update #1
Our girlfriend, Sue, was missing at the mall on Saturday night. Jamie, Heather, Sue, and I went shopping at about 8 o'clock Saturday night at the local mall. We were all trying on clothes in Abercrombie and Fitch, and then we noticed Sue was missing. We looked through the Abercrombie and Fitch dressing rooms and the actual store for her. Then, we decided to split up to cover the entire mall. We used our cell phones to call back and forth regarding our whereabouts. Everyone was so worried, and the mall was about to close. Finally, Jamie checks the mall bathroom for Sue. Sue was lying in a stall covered in blood and bruises. After a trip to the ER, Sue told us and the police that three girls in Abercrombie and Fitch had told her they would give her good coupons if she would follow them to the restroom. Instead, they beat her badly, and they stole her purse.
2006-11-07 13:09:40 · answer #1 · answered by catzrme 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
When I need ideas for stories I open the dictionary at random pages and pick random words and it is amazing the stories that are generated in my imagination. It's called "Brainstorming".
Try it!
2006-11-07 21:07:37 · answer #2 · answered by I Drum 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how about the main part of the story is her friends searching for her and then one has to go to the bathroom and finds her there and it was like her bf's ex or something?
2006-11-07 21:04:32 · answer #3 · answered by Caty 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's better if you write your own story, you don't have to worry about anyone stealing your idea.
2006-11-07 21:06:43 · answer #4 · answered by newyorkgal71 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Must have been a gang of girls who are jealous that she made the cheerleader squad.
2006-11-07 21:01:40 · answer #5 · answered by rwbblb46 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How much are you paying?
2006-11-07 21:00:02 · answer #6 · answered by Harriet 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
are you serious,....its not that hard...its only one paragraph
2006-11-07 21:03:06 · answer #7 · answered by smile4love 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋