I'm doing a story about a young ambitious Black girl who dates a 18th Street Latino gang member and she ends up being raped and strung up on drugs.
2006-11-07 09:23:22 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I want her boyfriend to be the antagonist/and the cause of all her problems.
2006-11-07 09:32:17 · update #1
He boyfrined does rape her and causes her to become a drug addict.
2006-11-07 09:43:05 · update #2
it sounds repeated...but i think you could make it more unique by adding your own style.
2006-11-07 12:53:19 · answer #1 · answered by LaurenElizabeth 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, gosh, unless her boyfriend is the one who rapes her, he isn't the cause of all her problems, is he?
In real life, there is always more than one bad influence, and more than one good one.
So I don't think your plot is all that great. Keep trying.
2006-11-07 17:37:28 · answer #2 · answered by Richard E 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
That's a very very thin premise. You need a LOT of structure to that story.
Good luck. Spend much more time writing.
2006-11-07 20:55:13 · answer #3 · answered by Chrissy: The Angry Typer a/k/a Mood Mole 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
could be good, depends on how u build up the story =)
2006-11-07 17:30:44 · answer #4 · answered by OwNaGeR 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are sum kinda freaky my fwend!!
2006-11-08 16:11:55 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋