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Question

Can anyone correct each fragment, you can (1) link it to an independent clause or (2) develop it into a complete sentence. thnks 10 points 4 u :)

Whenever I am at the beach. I think about the vast world that exists beneath the ocean's surface. Though the marine life is interesting. The ocean floor is what really interests me. The deepest known spot in the Pacific Ocean is the Marina Trench. Which is the deepest known spot in any ocean. It lies 36,198 feet below sea level. In 1960, the bathyscaph Trieste dove to a record depth in the trench. Plunging 35,810 feet. The Atlantic Ocean is the shallowest ocean. With an average depth of 11, 700 feet. The deepest known spot in the Atlantic Ocean is the Milwaukee Depth. It lies 27,493 feet below the surface. In the Puerto Rico Trench. These trenches exceed the average depth of the ocean floor. Reaching deep into the earth's surface.

Answer 1

Whenever I am at the beach, I think of the vast world that exists beneath the ocean's surface. Although the marine life is fascinating, the ocean floor is what truly interests me.

The deepest known spot in any of the oceans is the Marina Trench. It lies 36,198 feet below sea level in the Pacific Ocean. In 1960, the bathyscaph Trieste plunged a record-breaking 35,810 feet below the surface of this trench.

The Atlantic Ocean is the shallowest of the oceans, with an average depth of 11,700 feet. The deepest known spot in this ocean is the Milkwaukee Depth, which lies 27,493 feet below the water's surface in the Puerto Rico Trench. These trenches exceed the average depth of the ocean floor, reaching deep into the earth's surface.

Answer 2

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Whenever I am at the beach, I think about the vast world that exists beneath the ocean's surface. Though the marine life is interesting, the ocean floor is really what interests me. The deepest known spot in any ocean, located in the Pacific, is the Marina Trench which lies 36,198 feet below sea level. In 1960, the bathyscaph Trieste dove to a record depth of 35,810 feet in the trench. The Atlantic Ocean is the shallowest ocean with an average depth of 11,700 feet. The deepest known spot is the Milwaukee Depth which lies 27,493 feet below the surface in the Puerto Rico Trnch. These trenches exceed the average depth of the ocean floor and reach deep into the earth's surface.

Answer 3

Whenever I am at the beach, I think about the vast world that exists beneath the ocean's surface. Though the marine life is interesting, it's the ocean floor that really interests me. The deepest known spot in the Pacific Ocean is the Marina Trench; which is the deepest known spot in any ocean. It lies 36,198 feet below sea level. In 1960, the bathyscaph Trieste dove to a record depth in the trench by plunging 35,810 feet. The Atlantic Ocean is the shallowest ocean, with an average depth of 11, 700 feet. The deepest known spot in the Atlantic Ocean is the Milwaukee Depth; it lies 27,493 feet below the surface in the Puerto Rico Trench. These trenches exceed the average depth of the ocean floor, reaching deep into the earth's surface.

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