Im in 7th grade and wrote a poem to my pregnant math teacher?

Question

who will be leaving this week?

A Bid of Farewell

You have taught me a lot about mathematics.

Sometimes I only wish to lock myself in the attic.

When I get frustrated I wanted to break down.

And just move right out of town.

And just take the Manhattan bound.

But I will only just hear those strange sounds.

For years I learned to hate math,

And burst in to a fiery wrath.

But when I come into your room,

Learning it was never such a big doom.

You helped me since the first day,

Up till now and today.

But as each time the bells ring,

As each day joy brings,

I will forever remember you,

But now I bid you farewell.

(I wrote this myself. What do you think?)
if the poem doesn't show up in stanza sorry.

Answer 1

It might not be formally correct, but I can see it comes from the heart, which more than compensates for any technical deficiencies.

As one who never was any good in math, I'm glad you lucked up on a teacher who was able to help you with your math phobia.

Speaking as a teacher, a poem such as yours would be something that would be treasured for years to come.

Answer 2

Poetry can be fun and great for humor. If you hone the skill you can really pass time and entertain people. Check out the one I just wrote. I am MAN I chop wood It is good I get home Eat some steak It is great I go to the mall Buy some lingerie To feel more gay It's all about balance

Answer 3

i think the poem is great. every teacher would love to get a poem from their student. and your poem is so nice. I'm sure your teacher would love it. go on give it to your teacher. good luck...........

Answer 4

I think that's awesome! Teachers love it when students give them things to say they're special.

Answer 5

That is so sweet. I'm sure your teacher will love it. That is very meaningful and will probably make her feel absolutely wonderful.

Answer 6

Your teacher will love it!

Answer 7

I think your teacher will cherish it!