You are good,
God is great,
You are sweet,
God is tough to beat.
You have a place in my heart,
Right next to God.
And if I could,
I would rather have you forever then an I-Pod.
I miss you when you're not here,
I wish you were here when I had the flu.
I just want you to know,
That every day I thank God for you.
2006-11-06 08:49:45 · 8 answers · asked by ~S~ is for Stephanie! 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Hey Miss Darcy,
It does not matter if you wrote it, you are anonymous. But I don't like it. It is too far off point. To even compare a person to an I-Pod, in the same poem with God, well, I don't like it. Sorry.
2006-11-06 09:03:18 · answer #1 · answered by BuyTheSeaProperty 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's cute. The tone is kind of ambiguous, though; it seems like you're deliberately trying to sound kinda dumb ("I would rather have you forever then an I-Pod"), but it also sounds sort of sincere in places.
2006-11-06 08:56:35 · answer #2 · answered by Drew 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that is sooooooo cute! not like a poem poem but like a greetin card poem
i think u wrote it (i know how you feel i was kinda inbaressed to admit that i really wrote the book everybody liked- i don't really like attention)
2006-11-06 13:17:42 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's kinda cheesy and stupid with the iPod part, and it's too religious. I can tell you wrote it. It was kinda obvious from not saying if you wrote it or not.
2006-11-06 13:27:59 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its nice and sweet.
2006-11-06 08:55:34 · answer #5 · answered by Ralph 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
don't quit your day job, this poem sucks.
2006-11-06 08:57:58 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
nice !
2006-11-06 09:07:42 · answer #7 · answered by Leona 666 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww cute! :-]
2006-11-06 08:57:49 · answer #8 · answered by whereHAVEallTHEcowboysGONE 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋