Tell me how this poem is that i just got done with, thank you!?

Question

Confusion

Darkness encloses me
In a field of white fog
With wall as tall as mountains
To keep me inside my own labyrinth
Confusion and fear guide me
Into dead ends and dark allies
And I turn once again into the depths of my confusion
I then turn around and run towards a light
Where I find a big bronze gate
But alas I have no key and I fall to my knees and weep
For the ones that I live stand on the other side
And they point for me to go back into the darkness
The labyrinth consumes me and the gate disappears
And once again the darkness encloses me
In a field of white fog
With walls as tall as mountains
To keep me inside this prison
Confusion and fear guide me
Into dead ands and dark allies
And I turn again and again
In the depths of my own confusion

Answer 1

Not bad, stayed on track with the perception of the poem. Good job!

Answer 2

Its a very good poem, but there is a sadness about it
and i believe that sadness comes from you . what has happened in your life to make you want to hid in the darkness .?
I know about fear , guilt and shame, and its not nice
i know about benign confusion . You see i use to write poems just like this one.But that has all changed for me
because i have found Jesus Christ and he has turned my life around. He can do the same for you if you will believe in him

remember Jesus loves you know matter what you had done or think of yourself.

Answer 3

nice!

Is it yours?