Friendship
Friendship is like a boat
Sailing on the calm blue sea
Gliding on the waves
Slow, smooth, and free
Until the storm of bitterness comes
Tosses the boat without a care
Water rages, thunder blows
Sending the waves of sorrow in the air
The storm stops and all is quiet
Everything is still as stone
Everyone is gone
Leaving one standing alone
The world is full of hate
When will this cycle break?
2006-11-06 04:16:00 · 11 answers · asked by princessofthethrown 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
that poem was so sweet im crying now
u would be a great poet u have got a good talent :) xx
2006-11-06 04:17:50 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
the beginning is nice but the middle and end part, i find depressing.
2006-11-06 22:52:51 · answer #2 · answered by Kiara 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good.
2006-11-06 13:47:28 · answer #3 · answered by Judas Rabbi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's ok....happy poem about friendship would be better....that's not a friendship that was described...
2006-11-06 12:21:30 · answer #4 · answered by ~LAX Mom~ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i liked it
2006-11-06 12:23:36 · answer #5 · answered by mycelica95 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats reall good!!!
2006-11-06 12:17:38 · answer #6 · answered by Bleeding Love 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
love it
2006-11-06 18:57:14 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really quaint.
2006-11-06 17:02:53 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good
2006-11-06 12:17:31 · answer #9 · answered by jdc591 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is ok.
2006-11-06 12:17:27 · answer #10 · answered by DaRkViXeN 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋