who can check if the sentence is correct in english? shoul I change anying to make it sound better? thank you?

Question

In response to the letter of xx regarding verification of the invoices number 4 and 5 of the cc company, we inform that due to the number of hours at work which were confirmed by our manager, the invoice number 4 should be reduced by net 25 zloty. The invoice 5 mentions 14 sets of protective clothing for workers but only 6 people maximum worked a day, because such was a demand for our company.

Answer 1

I would write
In response to your letter dated xx regarding verification of the invoices number 4 and 5 of the cc company, we inform you that due to the number of hours worked as confirmed by our manager, the invoice number 4 should be reduced by net 25 zloty. Invoice 5 mentions 14 sets of protective clothing for workers although only 6 people maximum worked a day, due to reduced demand from our company.


Hope that helps x

Answer 2

In response to the letter of xx regarding verification of the invoices numberED 4 and 5 of the cc company, we WISH TO inform YOU that due to the number of hours OF work which were confirmed by our manager, invoice number 4 should be reduced by net 25 zloty. invoice 5 mentions 14 sets of protective clothing for workers but only A MAXIMUM OF 6 people worked THAT day, because THAT was THE demand FROM our company.

Answer 3

I response to the letter of xx regarding the verification of invoices number 4 and 5 of the cc company, we wish to inform you that we have reviewed our work records and believe that we have been over billed on invoice #4 . For the number of hours worked confirmed by our manager, invoice #4 should be reduced by 25 zloty. Also, invoice #5 mentions 14 sets of protective clothing for the workers, but in fact a maximum of 6
workers worked each day. We would appreciate your attention in this matter.
Sincerely,

I hope this helps you. I have made the letter more concise without changing the meaning.
Good luck.

Answer 4

It is fairly correct up to the last sentence when it should read:

...."......but only a maximum of six people worked each day due to our company's needs."

Answer 5

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Answer 6

'because such was the demand for our company' would be much better :)

Answer 7

Go with Daniel B's answer.

Answer 8

r u actually trying to check if many people can pick out errors?

Answer 9

on the second line, you have left out YOU, after we inform. good luck

Answer 10

Just forget it and pay the whole bill.