say it to me now and i wont cast a shadow
say it to me with a frown and i'll be here tomorrow
tell me where
tell me when
if i dont stop now then i wont stop then
tell me what to do, tell me what to say
all of this is driving me quite insane.
its easy for me to alter what i call my brain so that when i speak to you i'll know exactly what im saying.
what's wrong with me? what's wrong with you?
function like HIM! he's a normal human being...
a walking, talking f*ck*ng machine.
never mind ...
i'll spend my time doing other worthless things but nothing that could ever link you to me
lingering in hope like a child lost in a crowd
i find myself with all hope shattered on the ground.
i wrote stories to you that were unessassary to be told
simple words as unapealing to you as a white wall covered in mold.
what do you think of it? what do you think its about?
2006-11-05 18:35:23 · 10 answers · asked by e 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
it sounds like it is from someone that is in love with the person they are writing it too yet that person really does not care for the writer and the writer is becoming a bit like a stalker yet they do not wish to be this. they have hopes the person will change there mind and care for them yet there hopes are always shattered again and again the simple stories are like there pleas to understand why they should be together but they were unnecessary because the person did not even read them and it had on effect on them.
2006-11-05 18:45:04 · answer #1 · answered by lost_soul 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It reads to me like a child reaching out to a parent seeking guidance with a relationship already gone arye. It also sound like the child is being sarcastic in this request knowing that it is all too late. I like the rhythm of the words but if I am wrong about the meaning then what difference does it make? And you don't need the expletive to get your message across though it is effective.
2006-11-06 02:55:30 · answer #2 · answered by LORD Z 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, this is only a guess - but it sounds like trouble with a parent....or a family member. As to what I think of it in the writing style? Top points for feeling, no clue if it's original or not though. Definitely has depth, and real meaning. Hope others are able to appreciate it as well, even if I didn't guess right.
2006-11-06 02:42:20 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
On reading through I find a tragedy in pathetic words.However this is a good attempt to appeal to object but it is the subject that always matter and decide the future course of action.
2006-11-06 02:49:52 · answer #4 · answered by shri 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's about someone who refuses to be like the rest and they call this person insane but actually this person is completely sane and probably more free than we will ever be. Once you've learned to accept who you are the world will say you're crazy, but I say those motherfuckers can rot in a fiery hell!!!
2006-11-06 02:49:44 · answer #5 · answered by metal maniac 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like it's venting frustration about discouraging comparisons of the narrator with somebody else. The narrator's creative talents or individualistic tendencies are not valued by others.
2006-11-06 02:40:22 · answer #6 · answered by snoomoo 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
If this is your original work, you have real talent!!!!! The words speak to me on so many different levels....
thank you for sharing this....
2006-11-06 06:52:47 · answer #7 · answered by Midnight Runner 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its good.... you can make a song out of it...
for me its all about a lost love...
2006-11-06 02:41:49 · answer #8 · answered by toni 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I feel so dumb after reading snooboo's answer
2006-11-06 02:44:17 · answer #9 · answered by G 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
very, very good.
2006-11-06 02:44:06 · answer #10 · answered by Mike H 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋