You were my sheild but now you're gone
I am a helpless warior in disquise
No one to talk to
No shoulder when I cry
No protection
Nothing at all
2006-11-05 05:18:56 · 10 answers · asked by Meme 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
And no... I am not gothic, crying for help, or have just lost a boyfriend. I wrote these after my dog died.
2006-11-05 05:31:35 · update #1
great! here im gonna add to it
i imagine it slower soo here it goes...o and i changed it a lil
i was here for u but u left me alone oh oh oh
now i am waiting for my new prince to come.bay-bay
i dont need ur lovin
but boi do i miss it so much!
u were my sheild but now ur gone
i am a helpless warrior in the heart
no one to talk to
no shoulder to cry on
no protection
nothing at all..when ur gone
2006-11-05 05:29:41 · answer #1 · answered by LiL mZ sMiLeZ ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
They are good. I also write lyrics. i'm in a punk rock band. Email me at pretty_in_punk6292@yahoo.com if you want to talk about lyrics or want a sample of my lyrics.
2006-11-05 13:30:20 · answer #2 · answered by alternativepunk 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Thats really good. Keep up the good work and you'll be well on your way to success.
2006-11-05 13:30:10 · answer #3 · answered by lollipop 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Not bad but I think you are crying out for help
2006-11-05 13:20:48 · answer #4 · answered by Mary Smith 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
sounds like you'll be in an emo band in no time.
2006-11-05 13:25:12 · answer #5 · answered by whit42083 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They're terrible, and age is not an excuse.
2006-11-05 13:32:48 · answer #6 · answered by anonymous 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋
are you getting over your first breakup? cuz those are pretty good.
2006-11-05 13:26:17 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
uhh well they could need some work,but they are ok...u spelt SHIELD wrong..
2006-11-05 13:21:24 · answer #8 · answered by Bree 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Not bad. Keep at it!!
2006-11-05 13:27:16 · answer #9 · answered by quatrapiller 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
pretty good
2006-11-05 13:21:20 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋