correct this one.. thanks!
It’s been a hell week for me, that’s why I can’t write anything more. As far as I can remember, that’s all I’ve learned for this week.
2006-11-05 05:11:10 · 6 answers · asked by roseann 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
It’s been a hell week for me; that’s why I can’t write anything more. As far as I can remember, that’s all I’ve learned this week.
2006-11-05 05:22:14 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I've had a bad week, which is why I can not write anymore. As far as I can remember, that is all I learned from this week.
"It’s been a hell week for me" -- Not much technically wrong with it, except maybe "for" is the wrong word, but it is extremely colloquial and can be made better by making the subject "I" rather than "It (the week)" and avoiding the word "hell."
"that’s why I can’t write anything more" -- "that" is changed to "which" because it is a better introduction to the clause and is used with a comma, whereas "that" is not used with commas. In technical essays, you usually try to avoid using contractions, so break those down to their separate words. "Anything more" becomes "anymore."
"As far as I can remember" -- I don't see anything particularly wrong here. Maybe change "remember" to "tell" for clarity, but that is not a big deal.
"that’s all I’ve learned for this week." -- Change "for" to "from" because you aren't preparing for the next week, you are going over what happened last week.
2006-11-05 13:23:16 · answer #2 · answered by wdmc 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's been a hell of a week for me and that's why I can't write anything more. As far as I can remember that's all I've learned for this week.
2006-11-05 13:13:59 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What do I correct?
Well, for the following, it's:
This week has been hell; that's why I can't write anymore. As far as I can remember, that's all I've learned this week.
2006-11-05 13:15:53 · answer #4 · answered by James Bond Chickz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's been a hell of a week for me; that's why a won't write anything any more.
i suggest refrasing your second sentence......
Of what I can remember, that's what I've learned from this week.
2006-11-05 13:21:33 · answer #5 · answered by Whats your problem? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a hell of a week...anything any more...
2006-11-05 13:13:07 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋