when i stare at the window i look for you
i think about the time you left me and yelled FU
i don't know why you smell like fish
if i could have anything in this world it would be one wish
for you to die in a fire
and stop calling me a liar
if i would've known your cruel ways by looking at your past
i would have had my friends kick your @Ss.
2006-11-05 02:54:39 · 21 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
LOL! Although it made me smile, lots, even chuckle, I would not try to make this a profession! Sorry, um ya did want honesty correct?
I am sure there is something else you are brilliant at!!!
Now go have some fun! And forget about the girl who broke your heart.... Trust me, it heals back in time to the sweetest of perfection!
2006-11-05 03:16:22 · answer #1 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you have issues,with relationships.. You definitely have a nack for poems, but the topic is not really what gets popular nowadays. So out of 10 I give it a 2.
2006-11-05 02:59:08 · answer #2 · answered by wallsuds 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too much rage,
let it go and move on with your life and turn the page.
She is not worth your positive or negative energy .
Is the poem part of a reality.
Send it to SNL they could make a skit
to make people laugh, out of it.
2006-11-05 02:59:02 · answer #3 · answered by ? 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Boy did some girl do you wrong. Chill child. The poem is not chill enough to be good. You got to be cool cat! Lol Just BREATHE!
2006-11-05 03:07:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Defintely different.A lot of hostility I feel. I rate it 5 out of 10. Kind of funny though.
2006-11-05 02:56:36 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's morning here and I just got my first real laugh in for the day. I hope your not going to send it in anywhere...Make sure they know its a joke, isn't it? If not, I apologize....but its really a funny poem. I liked it very much, really!!!!
2006-11-05 03:55:01 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey its a good one
i give u 8 out of 10
2006-11-05 03:12:15 · answer #7 · answered by pooja s 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i feel the rage in it.. and it is good by the way i give it a 10 all the words flowed together properly ..smell like fish ( nice one)
2006-11-05 05:50:23 · answer #8 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a bit bitter are we?
ya, what Captian A said.
we all get burned and some times we are the cause of it or the cause of others to get burned. sh*t happenes, move on.
2006-11-05 03:10:59 · answer #9 · answered by anotherpainintheazz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that poem was harsh, you mad at someone or what? anyway i give u 9 out of 10
2006-11-05 02:58:25 · answer #10 · answered by ωнєη уσυ ѕмιℓє уσυ мαкє мє ѕмιℓє 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋