Check the grammar and sentence structure. thx. if needing , change the structure.
All the XBOX were cushioned well before they were delivered. There must have something wrong with the transportation. As for the destroyed 27 sets of XBOX in case no.3, we will take instant measure to reimburse it .
2006-11-04 22:00:28 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
The following is a cogent edit of the paragraph in question, though I have taken liberties with it, the meaning is the same:
"All the XBOX's were securely packaged prior to their delivery. The 27 sets of XBOX's in case no. 3 must have been damaged during transportation. We will take immediate steps to reimburse the buyer."
2006-11-04 22:06:34 · answer #1 · answered by Biggie Shorty 2 · 2⤊ 1⤋
All XBoxes were cushioned well before they were delivered.There must have been something wrong with the transportation.For the damaged 27 sets of XBOX in the case no.3,we are taking immediate measures to reimburse the customer.
2006-11-04 22:32:44 · answer #2 · answered by alpha 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
All the Xbox sets were well-cushioned when they were packed, but they must have received damage during shipment. We will immediately reimburse you for the twenty-seven sets in case 3 that were destroyed.
2006-11-04 22:30:54 · answer #3 · answered by wild_turkey_willie 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Apostrophe S specifically means either a possessive or a contraction. It is incorrect to use it to create a plural. What you need is the correct plural form of XBox.
Also, you're missing a word in the second sentence, and the third sentence isn't particularly clear. "Reimburse it" doesn't make sense.
2006-11-04 22:24:48 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
there must have been something wrong
2006-11-04 22:04:20 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋