do you people like my poem?here it is:
Once I found a dog that was fluffy
He was nice and cute
I decided to name him Scruffy.
The bad news today
Is that he got hit by a car
When he ran away.
I miss that dog
I want him here
I miss that dog.
I wish I could say
Hey there Scruffy
When I come home every day.
I miss that dog
I loved him so much
I miss that dog, Scruffy.
Do you like it? And be serious and tell me what I should change.Thanx.
2006-11-04 16:04:34 · 13 answers · asked by mojoe_girl 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
The name of it is That Dog.
And repitition is important in a poem. If u don't no what it means, it means that you repeat some thing twice or more than twice in a poem because it is important. And I did not copy it. I don't wanna get arrested!
2006-11-04 16:14:21 · update #1
It's a good poem. It shows how you feel and it gets the message across of how you met and lost scruffy.
2006-11-04 16:08:49 · answer #1 · answered by Ms. H 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its a great poem cause it deals about how much you love and miss a dog
2006-11-05 00:07:20 · answer #2 · answered by Michelle 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you wanted my opinion: Honestly not good. It looks like you spent four minutes on it. Nothing deep or emotional in it at all. Terrible im srry. Try something from your soul
2006-11-05 01:27:53 · answer #3 · answered by Mikey Boy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry is about how it makes you the writer feel, if you feel better by expressing these feelings then it has done its job. If you're not sure of it then you have to change it to make it to what you want it.
2006-11-05 00:08:59 · answer #4 · answered by cherhub 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a very good poem.âº
2006-11-05 05:59:20 · answer #5 · answered by Celebrity girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think instead of i miss that dog, i want him here change the other i miss that dog so it doesn't get boring but other than that it was good
2006-11-05 00:09:00 · answer #6 · answered by Melissa 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a good poem.
2006-11-05 00:07:36 · answer #7 · answered by hopeless 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really sad. I hate that about the dog. Yes it's cute.
2006-11-05 00:09:20 · answer #8 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Aww... that's sad, but that was a good poem... it shows how you feel about your Scruffy. :-)
2006-11-05 00:12:39 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It needs work.
2006-11-05 00:06:57 · answer #10 · answered by ~SSIRREN~ 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋