In a personal narrative for a school assignment, what word can i replace "I"?

Question

I am overusing "I" way too much, any suggestions ?

Answer 1

If you saying things like "I think that whatever is a crime" Turn them into statements like "Whatever is a crime". You don't need the I think because that just makes it should like you unsure of yourself.

Answer 2

If it's a personal narrative, I is okay to use a lot. But if every sentence starts with I, try using a different sentence starter.
For instance:
"I walked along the dark path. I heard a noise and turned around. I saw a couple making out!"
could be replaced with
"While walking along the dark path, I heard a noise and turned to see a couple making out!"
Not a good example, but do you get what I'm saying? There's really nothing that replaces "I" unless you want to speak in third person, but if you want to cut down the I's, combine sentences. Capische?

Answer 3

She replaced right into a prisoner the full existence she hated her husband she hated her existence she lost her experience she lost her existence. she replaced into completely lost while she died she didn`t ought to ask why replaced into she that way she replaced into finally unfastened she replaced into no longer lost she replaced into no longer on my own she is there in heaven she is no longer own

Answer 4

Restate your sentences. Instead of saying "I decided to go to the mall", say " The decision to go to the mall was a good one"

Answer 5

You could say, 'the writer' or re-phrase the sentence so that, instead of starting with I or having I in it, you say something like, 'it is then possible to ...' rather than 'I would ...'
Hope this helps.

Answer 6

you got some good suggestions there. if all else fails ask your teacher to proof read it before the due date and make suggestions.

Answer 7

Well, actually, if you are talking about yourself, using "I" statements is a key to proper speaking technique. I, me, and myself are just fine.